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Joshua gulped hard, "Traci, I..."
She kissed him on the lips. Then she told him, "Don't answer now. It wouldn't be fair. I'll be back."
That evening as Joshua contemplated this strange turn of events, Traci walked in. She held her finger to her lips for him to be quiet. Then she closed the door and the blinds. She said, "I have to know for sure if I'll feel the same, now that I know you're not Dave."
Then she seductively stripped out of her clothes. She pulled back the covers and extracted Joshua's very hard cock out. She licked and sucked it. She got a little carried away and swallowed the length of him. He returned her enthusiasm by thrusting his pelvis up so his dick fucked her face.
She climbed on the bed and lowered her wet pussy onto his throbbing penis. Then they fucked. They fucked for twenty minutes and Traci came hard yelling, "I love you John. I love your fucking cock!"
Joshua decided to push his luck. He said, "I think I love you to. Tell me, have you ever had anal sex Traci?"
She looked a little shocked, but then decided it was worth it. She said, "No, but if you want to, I'll try it with you."
Joshua smiled now like the cat that ate the canary.
Traci took that as a yes and pulled off his cock. She used her fingers to rub some of her juices from her cunt to her asshole. Then she slowly impaled her ass on his rock hard cock.
It was very painful for her, but she thought of the pain he had endured and doubled her efforts until she came to rest on his pelvis.
Joshua really couldn't believe his luck. His hot step sister had fallen for his cock. Now he was balls deep in her ass and she had done all the work even. Joshua believed this was equivalent to a religious experience and as she started to fuck her ass up and down on his dick he said, "Oh my God! I love you."
The next morning Traci came to visit him again. She brought him flowers and held his hand. He looked into her eyes and saw she had been crying.
"What is it Traci?"
She sobbed a little, then, "I have something to tell you."
"Go ahead dear."
Tracy tried to compose herself and then blurted out, "I'm pregnant. I've known for over a month."
Joshua was shocked. Not that she was pregnant, but that he felt vindicated in knocking up his sister. He said, "Is there a problem?"
She sobbed for a minute and then told him, "Dave offered to marry me, but I couldn't stop thinking of you. I don't even know you and you don't know yourself. It's all so stupid, but..."
She started crying again. Joshua just waited. Finally she calmed down and said, "You're the real father. I'm so glad you are, because, I can't be with Dave. He resents what happened, but mostly I loved what happened."
She was crying again. After a long while Joshua squeezed her hand and said, "Look, I might be a bad guy, or I might be married with five kids, but it doesn't matter to me. I can't help how I feel. I'm ready to spend the rest of my life finding out who I am with you."
Two months later Joshua and Traci were married. The rest of their family, Chris, Jake, his father and step mother were all there. They had no idea that he was Joshua. In fact, they barely even mentioned that a man named Joshua even existed.
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- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 2 years agoInteresting, but as others pointed out, full of serious plot holes. As someone else pointed out, fingerprints and DNA would identify him. Even more, though, there are the dog tags. After four years in the infantry, and since his MOS was infantry and very likely with time in Iraq, he would be wearing his dog tags out of ingrained habit. When they are in a combat zone, shit happens and soldiers not only wear their tags, they also write their blood type in one or more places on their uniform.
The family would have to be extremely wealthy to cover hospital bills for three months. Facial reconstruction? Yeah, easily over $100k, add likely much higher. You can bet the hospital would be eager to establish an insurance carrier. And, the switch of hospital positions? Could happen, but swapping ID bracelets would invite deeper scrutiny, like comparing physical description. The casts were similar, but not exact, and would again invite closer scrutiny, especially when the patient has claimed amnesia.
Drinking and getting into a car? Well, you can't fix stupid. The chances the other driver would happen to be his step sister's fiance? Only in soap operas does that happen with any regularity.
Other than sleeping with the horny step sister, the main point seems to have been knocking the girl up who had ridiculed and picked on him. His father is withdrawn and doesn't intervene on his son's behalf, and all the steps treat him like dirt? What is his motivation to return home again? If he could get another billet, the Army might have become home. Going to college on the GI bill or getting a blue collar job were viable options. Boot camp and four years service, he should at least be E3 unless he's a total screw up. Then again, he and his friend got drunk and then got into a car.
Yes, it's not incest, but it is taboo, and the category is incest and/or taboo.
As another reader pointed out, it's a fantasy; this one just happens to require a greater suspension of disbelief. It's not bad writing, in fact it was rather engaging, but the situation wasn't clearly thought out, and there's ignorance of hospital safety practices and about the military. Plus, leaving the story here? A 3 is the best it warrants.
That said, while the story is old, the writer should keep writing because practice improves the skill.
Anonymousabout 4 years agoTo much sex can make ones equipment get SORE
Anonymousover 6 years agowhere was the retribution for all the years of their shitty treatment? She laughed and made fun of 'dickless' but loved getting fucked longer and harder and getting knocked up by his bigger than Dave's cock. She needed to be told who she'd been fucking just after he fucked her once more in the ass, laughed and then said, "It's been fun. See Ya', sis.".
Anonymousabout 7 years agoDefinitely needs a complete re-write, as the story is muddled and, frankly, weak and poorly thought-out. I would suggest the author read through some of the better authors here, like Xarth, PacoFear, Chunks, beachbum1958, Nikki 2021, or Chargergirl to see how a story like this could be tightly plotted and laid out intelligibly and still be interesting, hot, satisfying, and compelling; at the moment it has more holes than a swiss cheese.
