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Click here"I like nuts." She reached out and brushed her hand along his crotch. "Maybe later you can give me some of your special nuts." She winked.
Daren felt a tingle run through him. "Oh man." He groaned.
"I know exactly what you like Daren. You like me talking dirty to you and this time I mean it. I'm going to drive you crazy until you drive your hard pole through my new little body. Then when we get to school I'm going to make the other girls so jealous they'll be begging you for a fuck." She said. "Get a goodnights sleep tonight Daren, because your life is going to change and you are going to need the energy."
Reading this again after so many years. I wish you finished it though.
Immeadiatly comes to mind, that movie from the 1980's.With how she was created. Though with jessica albas body and more depth to the story i think this is better.
I've allways liked this fantasy, and now I'm beyond happy to have found a story about it! I like the way you think. Only problem, as already stated, is the spelling errors.. But hey! You're only human, mistakes are made. Keep up The good work.
There are a lot of editing and spelling errors. Maybe have a friend or even find someone on here willing to have a look see. Otherwise it's a great "Weird Science" story. Looking forward to reading the rest.
the proof reading needs some tweaking - I know I'm a grammar/spelling nazi - but it throws me when I spot errors, and spoils the buzz. However I like the premise, and the characterisation, and the pace - looking forward to reading the next bit...