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Click hereSiara grabbed her hand and squeezed it. "No, don't be sorry. I... I really enjoyed it. It was incredible!"
Kelsey stared at her for a few seconds, then she giggled and squeezed Siara's hand in return. "We're gonna go now, but I was wondering if you two wanted to do something with us tomorrow?"
Siara nodded quickly. "Yes, we'd love to."
"Cool. Just come by our villa then, okay? We're at the Ocean Club, we're the fourth—"
"We know," Siara said, giving Ryan a playful smirk. "We'll be there. Does eleven sound alright?"
"Yeah, that sounds great," Kelsey said. She smiled at the two of them as they left in a bit of a hurry. There was little doubt in her mind that they, at least, were going straight back to their room and fuck each other's brains out. She briefly wondered whether Ryan was as awesome in bed as Damon was.
The three girls quickly went to the bar, where Stacey settled the tab and Kelsey searched for her heels, which she'd taken off once they started dancing. Everyone in the crowd seemed determined to congratulate and thank them for their show, and it took about twenty minutes for them to finally get out of there. They hurried back to their villa, their minds already filled with the thoughts of what they would do once they got there, and they never even noticed the two people sitting along the beach near the water.
Damon sighed as he held Amanda close, listening to her cry while the waves calmly swirled near their feet. "Amanda, honey, tell me what's wrong, please..." he said for the dozenth time. All she'd done after he'd caught up with her was cry. He kissed the back of her head, tenderly squeezing her in his arms.
Finally, she looked up at him, her eyes blood red from her crying. "I miss Kelsey, Damon. I miss her so, so much! I want her back," she stammered through her tears.
Damon felt his own eyes get moist, and he clenched his teeth. "I know, baby. I want her back too," he said softly.
To be continued...
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- COMMENTS
Anonymous5 months agoI realize it's been over a decade, but I keep hoping one day you'll start writing again. Your stuff was top notch.
Comentarista82over 8 years ago...threesomes or however this was going to go, so I won't rate it--but I'll tell you before I discovered that angle, you had plenty of detail on the guests, their looks, Vincent, the surroundings, etc. Well-written and good dialogue otherwise.
Northern_Onealmost 11 years agoIt's so long, with so many characters - all perfect looking, all rich, all nymphomaniacs - that I ended up skimming most of the story and giving it a lower score than the actual writing might otherwise deserve.
If we haven't read the first story how are we supposed to know what the relationship between the brother and sister is? And, I know it's erotic fiction, but I'm pretty sure Youtube would have been inundated in seconds with footage of the goings on. And a minor royal? Please.
jason2313over 11 years agoI liked the story for the most part, but what happened to Vincent? Was he just an opener character, and if so it was a little poorly done cuz i kind of liked him, and then you just dumped him.
Anonymousover 11 years agowhy bother looking for the other story it obviously wasn't GOOD enough to keep here and had to be deleted.
