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Click hereThanks for all the encouraging comments, and to everyone who followed me down the river. My apologies to everyone who wanted a different ending, either happier or more vengeful, but the story went where it went. Hope you weren't too disappointed.
TMIMH
- COMMENTS
jayrel47about 2 years agoSurprise there's no comments on this story. Thought it was great except for the ending. Another chapter would have been good or having flash backs and finally getting some vengeance would have been good, but the ending left me a bit hollow. I see you haven't posted for a while and was wondering if you have posted elsewhere
Infosaugerover 2 years agoMind control is not my thing, so I just read the first and the last chapter.
I'm disapointed in the eneding but have an idea for a sequel. I searched on LIT but I found no sequel or alternate ending.
Techumsahover 2 years agoFirst chapter not bad then by the end it is ridiculous even for fantasy that something ends that way.
Anonymousover 2 years agoI really loved the beginning of this story. I think he had a major problem ending it. Is it effective? You bet? Is it seriously horrifying (especially when you realize her "love" for Tom is very secondary to her love of being an absolute slut.) I point you to The New Neighbor for a story that is fair, just and ends well.
