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Click hereNow, poetry is something that I really do appreciate, and this one is very effective indeed.
It went fairly well in my head, but your voice added a lot to that.
In some pathetic gesture, my headphone cable slithered off my desk whilst I was listening... I kid you not.
The repetitions and the cadence give it an almost Edgar Allen Poe like quality, as if the Raven were intended to arouse rather than chill.
And yes it has to be listened to, not just read. Your voice makes that much more powerful.
This is absolutely wonderful and LeBroz was right, your voice is amazingly sexy. Fantastic work.
...what you said in the thread...that this poem is a spoken word piece and sounds better then it reads. Now, I often read the works here and in books out loud anyway, but I do appreciate hearing your interpretation more...I'd love to see you read it, watch your expression and get the full impact.
BTW, a 4 From CharleyH is a fine score...she's not the 5-slut I am...getting her interested in your work is a mixed blessing. Your average score may go down, but she'll give you good honest feedback and your skill will increase.
I'm a scorekeeper too (*blush*), but I'd always be pleased to get feedback from her, regardless of score...