All Comments on 'Behna ki choot kholi'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
sexy

i always love brother sisters love stories

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
write more stories please

please keep writing. you are good. please write more stories. there are very few pakistani people who write incest stories. keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
ammi k bjai

meri ammi ery very very sexy ha name Azra gaaaaaaaaand 44 Doooooooooooooooodh 42d ha meri ammi ki seting uncle se ha ager aap ko kurna ha to plz call me or sms me on my mom 0346-3108179

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
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Well I think it was a good try but it does not make sense when the complete surroundings and all behaviors and seducement is not there. Afghan_boy you should first fantasize the whole story in mind and then start to write part wise.

1 Back Ground

2 Breif out look of each person

3 Seduction

4 Responses

5 Final pleasure

Zarpio1

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
ho geya mera kaam

massttt...

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