As an erotic author myself, I always get frustrated when I read a good story which is ruined by poor grammar and spelling. A common reason for story rejection, is badly punctuated speech. I can help with that. Happy to help with proof reading and providing constructive criticism. I am known to respond promptly and will normally contact back within a day or so. If I'm taken by your story, I may make suggestions for developing the storyline to make it better. Please also only send stories in line with my category preferences - which are fairly extensive - in doc, docx or rtf format. I will be very honest, but hopefully constructive in my critique. If I really like the story, I will help with a full edit. Please don't forget to fill in the form correctly with a *working* return email address! Otherwise, I can't reply to you! Looking forward to reading your work...