- Erotic Poetry
- Tit Fucking
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…baby oil,
generous,
smeared by the palmful
into my valley.
Straddle me.
I’ll squeeze my hills for your glide.
Ride me to slickness,
(yours)
thick on my neck.
I wish your mark was a brand.
- COMMENTS
LeBrozover 16 years agoVery nice for a quickie — write, that is. Solid imagery without being wordy.
Angelineover 16 years agoOne of the Literotica poetic archetypes lol. There are so many poems on this subject here that I'm sorta sick of reading them, but this is also a nice spare poem with an ending I really like. You'll probably get better comments from people who haven't been here so long and maybe read as many poems like this at Lit. <wry emoticon>
Your poem has been recommended today in the New Poem Review thread on the Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum. Thanks for the read. :)
