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"Why the United Nations?" Anne asked. "Why aren't we getting help from FEMA or some other agency from the United States?"
"Haven't you heard?" The man replied, before he strode off to rejoin his squad. "That country doesn't exist anymore."
Elias stepped outside, beside his mother, until the men were out of sight. Anne reached out to grasp his arm, stronger than she ever had, as if she was shaken up inside or afraid.
Above their heads, several planes were busy leaving long gray trails in the sky.
- COMMENTS
LordSlamdawggalmost 5 years agoI liked the two main character arcs more then the dystopian plot . But it was all well done for that genre. Supporting characters need polish in terms of polishing the rough diamond. In terms of completeness, I would have enjoyed face off confrontation where mother and son actually verbally acknowledge the shift in their relationship . But the silent assent in tandem with stealthily reaching out for physical love by Anne was authentic as well.
Full marks *****
