by RachelTaylor
The scenario is really erotic, and the attention to detail adds a lot to the story. Also, having it told from a female perspective increases the "arousal factor." Perhaps next time you could relate the same scenario, but with a reversal of roles; that is, the guys spend most of the time pleasing the wife; especially orally, while she assumes the posture of Jared and holds them by the ears (or whatever) and describes what she wants them to do. THAT would be SOooooo Hot!
Great. One of the best I have read.Good detail.Hot,hot lady. I like the fact that she was willing to please. Hope to read more from you.
Hmmm loved the story, I am sure the friends are up for some more adventures.
I'm reall y enjoying this! Hurry with more!
Rachel, you are driving me NUTS!
Thanks for these installments - I'm now so damn hard!