My Best Friend's Father Ch. 01

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LolaScott
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His expression turned from shock to shame and he began to cry. This frightened me and I began to cry as well; I was crying very hard, shaking, sobbing, and it hurt to cry. I was wet and cold and he looked at me, pushed my wet hair away from my face and kissed me, and we kissed and somehow we were against the wall. He was putting his cock back into me; it hurt but he looked at me kindly, touching me. He was still crying. I just looked at him, his shoulders above me; his fair skin seemed white under he bright light against the black rain. He was moving in me - he was again fucking me. I focused on his shoulder muscles watching them twitch and flex as he slowly fucked me. I felt my body moving with him and I was shocked - still not fully aware, or something. I orgasmed again and it hurt so badly I cried out. He covered my mouth, gently shushing me. Then suddenly he looked like he was in pain, grabbed his cock and pulled out, cumming on me again. He came so hard it hit my lip and I tasted him. Then there was a noise - the heavy door moving. He jerked me up onto my feet. Suddenly he was gone out of the light of the deck. The porch door opened and I stood there dazed, my wet nightgown, covered in dirt, cum, and blood, now sticking to my body. I clamped my eyes shut as I heard the huge wooden door un jar and open. I was ready for the devil - or the lord, who ever came first - to be there. I opened my eyes and it was Carrie!

She looked at me, more surprised than she'd ever been. She grabbed my arm and led me into the house. She never said a word. She walked me to the bathroom and gave me a towel. She helped me get into clean clothes then we slipped back into bedroom quietly.

This was just the beginning…

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Wow!!

Probably the best story I have read in a very long time! Very well told; beautiful descriptions of not only actions, but also your alive emotions and detailed recall. Very impressive, not contrived. You have a real gift!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Best story I have read on this site.

Now, to be honest it is not the most innovative or non-cliche story ever, but I think it is so well written that you can't stop. I have never took the trouble to comment even if I enjoyed the story. This is the first time I was compelled to comment. Thank you for writing such a good story. I haven't even read the rest of the chapters, and I love it already. I am sure the characters will become more compelling in the forthcoming chapters. Keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
wow

that was an awesome beginning

1Master11Master1almost 13 years ago
Excellent!

Very well done story, excellent attention to pace and detail.........bravo.....

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
very well done

this was writen as well, or better than most erotica that i have read!! i could actually picture the happenings!! again very very well done

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