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Click hereOnce we were all naked and horny as hell, she was truly used to her heart's desire.
She was the most beautiful whore on earth. And she was mine.
the 'whore' stuff pretty much ruined what could have been great. and yeah, the ending was a real train wreck, worst possible wrapup.
I liked it. Also, with 83 stories on the site I think you've given these ungrateful bah-stahds their money's worth. (and they've paid $0.00) Creative work, weather it's painting, sculpting or music/performing arts takes time and energy. And sometimes you fall into a dry hole and have to bail on a creation. Thanks for posting; I like your writing and themes.
Hello, thank you for this story
The idea was good and it made sense in places.
It was great to read how he dominated her. but there is so much to experience.
Then the shitty end came. I've never read such a bad ending.
the ending from the brain of a 12 year old.
Please write a second part and just pretend that this group sex thing didn't happen...
Talk about her old days, let her do things for him, in public, with toys, control her, maybe the aunt or daughter if necessary. but no more gangbangs.
So not worth more than 3 stars.