Niram Maariya Pookkal Ch. 08

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Naan sonnathai ketta udane ,ammaavin muham vetkaththil sivanthathu.(Athu kooda azahaathaane irunthirukkum.!)

"Podaa,...padavaa rascal! Ippadi ellaam pesune,...unnai appadiye adichu konnuduven.Pesura pechaip paaru.Rombaththaan pesure.Unga appanukku irukkira kozuppu thane unakkum irukkum.sari...sari...Vandiyai edudaa"nnu, en kaathaip pidiththu thiruha,...naanum poiyaai alarinen.(Muthalil kaathu.Appuram ethaip pidiththu thiruhap poraalo?!)

Vazi muzukka,ammaa en thol pattai pidiththukkonduthaan vanthaal.Avalin valathu pakka 36"kirni pazam, sponch maathiri en muthuhil oththadam koduththukkitte vanthathu.(Vandiyai paaththu ottudaa thambi.Innum evvalavo irukku!!)

Vaziyil niruththi ,2 muzam mallihai poo vaangi thalaiyil vaiththukkondaal.Vandi bech-I adainthathu.

Beach-il sundal vaangi,ammaa kaiyil oru pottalaththai koduththu,naanum onnai eduththukkittu, kaviznthu kidantha boat pakkaththile,oru oramaa utkaarnthu,kadalaiyum,kadal alaiyaium paaththukkitte ethuvum pesaamal sundalai saappittu mudiththom.

Mani oru 6.30 irukkum.Satre iruttiyathum,"Dai...alaiyile kaal nanaichu vilayaadanum pola irukkudaa.vaadaa mutti varai irukkira aazaththukku pohalaam."

"Polaammaa."

"..........."

"Emmaa thayangare?"

"Illai... dress nanainchaa,nere veettukkuthaan pohanum.Dinner veliyile saappida mudiyaathedaa?"

"Ammaa ,athaip paththi neenga kavalaip padaatheenga.Kaayum varai ingeye ukkaanthirukkalaam.Illainnaa..., parcel vaangittu ,veettukku poi saappidalaam.Unga aasaip padi thanneele vilaiyaadungammaa.Beach-kku vanthuttu thanniyile irangalainnaa eppadi?"

Nandraaha irutti vittathu.Nalla velai powrnamiyaaha irunthathaal nalla nilavu oli.

Ammaa en valap pakkam irunthu,en idathu thol pattaiyai pidiththu, kettiyaai anaiththukkolla,iruvarum konjam konjamaaha thneerukkul iranginom.

Alai avesamaai iraichalodu varum pothu,engal muttikku mel thaneer uyarvathum....aduththa nimidame ,vantha thaneer kadalukkul thirumba sellum pothu, thanneer illaamal naangal eera manalil nirppathaiyum paarththu ammaa, sinnak kuzanthai pola kuthoohaliththu santhosamaai vilaiyaadinaal.

Alai varum pothu ,athaik kandu payantha ammaa ,ennai iruha anaikka,...ammaavin oru pakka kani en vilaavil azuntha,...naanum kettiyaai ammaavin iduppai valaiththu pidiththukkondu ,muzankaal nanaiyum alavukku sernthu nindrom.(Iduppil irukkira antha oru madippai thottu paaththiruppiye?!)

Naan,ammaavin idaiyai thazuvikkondirukka,ammaa than mulai en vilaavil azunthuvathaip patriyum kavalaip padaamal,alaihalai rasiththaal.Thaneer kaalai vittu nazuvum pothu koodave kaalukku adiyil iruntha manalum sariya...kuru kuruppil nelinthaal,siriththaal.

Alai athiha vehamaaha innum karaikku pakkaththil vanthathaal konjam mele erinom.Ammaa etho palaththa sinthanaiyil irunthaal.Naanum avalaahave aarambikkattum'nu nindrirunthen

"Ammaa payap padaathe "endru solli,innum konjam ulle poha "Dai..pothundaa alai perusaa vanthu, ulle izuththuttu poidap pohuthu.Paththiram".

Naan ammaavai irukki anaiththu,"mmaa payap pada venaam.Ennai kettiyaa pidichukko.Amma melum thirumba,....O My God...neridaiyaaha ammaavin iru pazuththa mulaihalum en maarbil azuththi nirkka...en unarchihalai velikkaattaamal,thooramaa alaihalai paarththukkonde,miha aruhil irukkum ammaa mulai azunthum suhaththai rasiththapadiye...nindrirukka,periya alai vanthathil iduppu varai thaneer vanthu nanainthu nindrom.

"Dai...melladaa ... Unnai kitte paaththaa,... etho,www channel-le varra aalu maathiri ,...payamaa irukku.Ivvalo periya kattai meesaiai endaa valaththu vachirukke? Drim panna koodaathaa?Aalukku thahuntha maathiri, meesai vachikkittu. Ssssssss...kuththuthudaa"

".............."

"Udambai vere exercise panni, irumbu maathiri vachirukke.Intha kai ellaam ennadaa irumbule sencha rod maathiri.... innum konjam irukki anaicheenaa, mooche ninnudum pola irukkedaa.Un thol pattai evvalo strong --aa irukku.kadichu thinnudaalam pola 'jam'nnu irukku.Ponnungalukku intha maathiri irunthaa thaan pidikkum.Nee intha maathiri, thol theriyum kai vaikkaatha banian ellaam pottuttu, veliye pohaathe.Kan padum.In tha kaalaththule vayasu ponnungalai kan kaanippaa vachirukkirathai vida,vayasu paiyangalai kan kaanippaa vachirukkirathuthaan payamaa irukku."

Ammaavin azahiya kungumam vaiththa netriyaium,athan rendu pakkamum spring pola surindiruntha mudi azahaiyum, mayakkum karu vizihalaiyum,eduppaana mookkaiyum,kozuththa kannangalaiyum,sivantha uthaduhalaiyum... nilavu oliyil paarththukkonde "Mmm... ennammaa kadikkanum pola irunthaa, kadingalen .Enakku valikkaathu.(Appadiyaavathu ammaa thoduthal kidaikumnu ninaikkire...un ennam theriyaathaa machi?!!)

Ammaavum,kadal kaatril pada padakkum than netri mudihalai othukkikonde,...oru maathiriyaaha thalai kuninthu ,ennai mel nokki paarththu,"Dai padavaa kadichiduven.Appuramaa kaththak koodaathu.Sollitten.(Kadaisiyile yaaru kaththaraanga'nnu paakkanum.)

Naan "sari"nnu sirikkavum,en kaiyai pidiththukkondu ,en pujaththai vaai vaiththu apple pazaththai vaai thiranthu kadippathaip pola, kadiththukkonde ...ennaip oru maathiriyaaha koornthu paarththaal(En? Manam kavarntha kaathali,...kaathal paarvai paakkira maathiri theriyuthaa?!)

Naan ammaavaip paarththu,style-aaha punnahaiththu,'jujupi...ithellaam oru kadiyaa?'enbathu pola paarkka,en kangalai koornthu paarththukkonde ,melum azuththi kadiththaal.Ammaa vaaithaan perukku kadiththukkondirunthathe thavira,aval ennam ,ennaip patrithaan irunthathu enbathu appothu enakku puriyavillai.

Ammaa kadiththathu,enakku valiththaalum,valiththathaai kaattikkollavilai.(Aambalai ille?!!)

"Dai... valikkalai?!?! Nijamaave irumbuthaanaa? Un thol pattaiyai kadichu, enakke vaai valikkuthudaa .Valikkira maathiri unnai enge kadichu vaikkalaam?nnu aval uthattin mel oru viral vaiththu ,kadalaip paarththu yosiththu nindrirukka,...en aruhil nindriruntha ammavin vaasam,mallihaiyin vaasaththodu ,...antha anthi maalaip pozuthil, nilavu oliyil, enakkul ethetho aasaihalai kilappiyathu.

"Unnai enge kadichaa valikkum? (Madam.Naanga sollavaa?) Sari.Ippo valikkuthaa, illaiyaa paaru?" endru ,en tholaip pidiththukkondu , aval mookku en kannaththil azuntha...en kanna sathaihalai kavvi,mun parkkalaal methuvaai kadikka...ammaavin moochu kaaththu kooda roja poo vaasam pola avvalavu suhamaa irunthathu.En ammaavin azahu muhaththai, ivvalavu close up-il ithuvarai paarththathillai.

Ammaa kadikkum pothu, avalin oru mulai nandraaha en kaihalil azuntha,ammaavin menmaiyaana iduppu, en iduppodu urasi azuntha,...erppatta unarchiyil appadiye irukki anaiththu ammaavai 'moch', 'moch' endru muthamida thondriyathu.

"Ssssss "nnu naan valiyil thulla,(Machi...nallaa nadikkire!!!) Ammaa siriththukkonde "mmm ...paaththiyaa... enge kadichaa, unakku valikkum'nnu ,un ammaavukku theriyumdaa" endru solli vilahinaal.Ammaa kadiththu vaiththathu kooda suhamaahaththaan irunthathu.

Vilaha muyandra ammaavai, en irumbuk kaihalaal aval iduppai sutri vazaiththu,...anaiththu izuththup pidiththu, "Enakkum kooda ,un azahaana udambai paakkirappo, kadichu vaikkanum pola irukkummaa.Kadikkavaa?"

Ammaa vekkap pattu,chei...podaa, nee enge kadichu vaipe'nnu enakku theriyum."

"Eppadimmaa theriyum."

"Athaan unnoda kan adikkadi ,athai thiruttuth thanamaa paakkuthe,...antha idaththai thaan solren " endru solli,vehamaaha veesiya kadal kaatrukku othungiya munthaanaiyai izuththu vittukkondaal.(Chinna vayasule paal kudikkarappo,nee athai kadichu vachathai un ammaa avvalavu seekkiram maranthiduvaalaa machi?!)

Naanum puriyaatha maathiri,"Ethaimmaa solreenga,enakku onnum puriyalai."

"Mmm...onnum puriyaatha sinna pappaa.En kannaththai thaan solren Madaiyaa."

"Aamaammaa correct-aa solliteenga.Athai kadikkavaa?"(Ethiyo ethir paarththu emaanthaalum azahaa samaalikkire machi!!!)

"Aiyo..vendaam.Unga appaave, kozu, kozu kannamdee unakkunnu, ithaithaan muthalle konji, rendu kannaththilum, maaththi maaththi nooru muththamaavathu koduppaar.Nee kadichu ethaavathu kaayam undaahittaa,unga appaavukku ennadaa pathil solrathu?"

"Pallu padaame kadichu vaikkirene?"

"Dai...oru ammaa kitte pesara maathiriyaa pesure?Ithellaam un pondaattikitte vachukko."

Satru neram kaziththu, ammaavin kai pidiththu pakkaththil iruntha padahu maraivil amara,...aruhe niraiya kaathal jodihal.Thannilai maranthu, pinnip pinainthu, ulahai maranthu irukka.Athaip paarththum ,athaip patri kavalaip padaamal ,satru thalli nerukkamaahave amarnthom.

"Amma naan kadikkirathu irukkattum.athukkaaha en kitte kovichukkaathe.Pasichaa sollummaa.Appaththaan, munnaadiye kizambi ,vaangi vara vasathiyaa irukkum."

Thirumbavum ammaa etho ninaivuhalil moozhinaal.Etho oru pirachinai ,aval manathai ariththukkondirunthathil,avalaal iyalbaaha irukka mudiyavillaienbathu enakku therinthathu..

"Dai... enakku ore kuzappamaa irukkudaa... veruppaavum irukku. Kovam ,kovamaa varuthu."

Naan 'tak'unnu ammaavai nerungi...

"Ennammaa ...en? enna pirachinai? sollunga ....unga muham ,ivvalo vaadip pohuthu'nnaa periya pirachinaithaan.sollunga."

Ippadi aatharavaaha pesikkonde ....ammaavai, en maarbil saaiththukkonden.Kaathalarhal pola,nerungi irunthom.Ammaavum ethum periya reaction kaanbikkalai.Aanaal ammaavin nerukkam enakkul ennavo seithathu.

"Illaidaa... intha vaishnavi venumne seiyaraalaa? Illai, theriyaame seiyaraalaa?Athukku unga appan vere udanthai.Rendu peraiyum konnu pottuttu, jail-kku poidap poren."

Naan satru pathattaththudan anaiththu,"ammaa enakku onnum puriyalai.Thelivaathaan sollungalen."

Ammaa peru moochudan,saliththu,"Dai podaa ,ungappanum un thangachium,en? avvalavu nerukkamaai irukkanum.Oru naalaikku ,nooru kiss... athuvum, vaayodu vaai vachu.Antha neram avaloda mulai rendum,avaroda maarle azunthi...athai ninaikkirappave ,erichalaa irukkudaa.Enakke en maha sakkalaththiyaa vanthuruvaalo'nnu , payamaa irukku.Enakku santhehamaavum irukku.Vere ethaachum ,namakku theriyaame....Ithukku meleyum nadakka vaaippu irukkumo'nnu kavalaiyaa irukku. Chee... ore thalai validaa."

Annaikku raaththiri 'good night kiss' kodukka vanthava,unga appaa pakkaththile paduththiruntha naan thoongarennu nenaichukkittu, unga appaa mele erip paduththu, 'poch' ,'poch'nnu avar uithattodu, iva uthattai vachu, uriyo,urinnu urincharaa.Ungappanum eeee'nnu izichaar.Appave rendu peraiyum vetti kooru pottu irukkanumnu thonichu."

Ammaavin kangal, ithai sollum pothu lesaa kalangi irunthathu.Ammaavai samaathaanap paduthuvatharkkaaha, ammavin kannathodu kannam vaiththu, en kaiyai kazuththai sutri pottu methuvaaha anaiththu... ."Cei...ithu thaan unga kovaththukku kaaranamaa.Naan ennamo ,ethonnu payanthu poitten.Naan ithukku vazi solren.Aanaa, athukku munnaadi enakku oru santheham.Unga rendu perle neengathaan perazahu.Muha azahilum sari.Udal vaahilum sari.Antha ponnu vaishukku ethu ungalai vida super-aa irukku? Ava kitte,ethaip paaththu appaa avakitte mayangi kidakkiraarnuthaan puriyalai.Enakku ithu pola vaaippu vanthaal,nichayam en choice neengathaan."

Amma naan sonnathau kettum kekkamaleyo,illai athan ul arththam purintho puriyaamalo,"Podaa enakku vayirellaam paththi eriyuthudaa.Sari...etho vazi irukkunnu sonne ille, ennannu sollu."

Naan ammaavin meth endra iduppaiyum,ange pithungith therintha vezuththa madippaiyum thadavikkonde"amma intha pirachinaikku kaaranam, oru infactuation thaan.Appaavin manasile enna irukko theriyalai.Ponnungalukku appan meleyum ,paiyangalukku ammma meleyum varum oru inam puriyaatha eerpputhaan ithu 'nnu ninaikkiren."

Amma udane"Illaidaa...appadinnaa,...namakkulle antha eerppu irukkunnaa, naama enna appadi anaichui kiss-aa adichikkirom.Ennaale oppukka mudiyalai."

"Amma ungalai oppukkavaa solren.Avvalavu en? Naanum ,neengalum ippadi kattip pidichikkittu, iruttil kaathalarhalukku maththiyile irukkom.Ithe pola vaishuvoda namma veettile...illai beach-le irunthirukkomaa? Naan thaan appaavidam ippadi irunthirukkirenaa? Udane ammaa en maarbil irunthu eza muyala,....naan ammaavai eza vidaamal serththu anaiththukkonden.

"Cheeeeii...nee solrathai paaththaalum correct-aa thaan irukku."

En kangalai utrup paarththa ammaa,"Athu sari...ennai en nee ippo ippadi kattip pidikkire? Unakkum eerppu mattum thaanaa? ...illai unmaiyile en mele aasaiyaa?

Naan ammaavinsathaip pidippaana kannaththil lesaaha muththamittu,"mmm..pommaa, naan unga mele uyiraiye vachirukken.Athukku per eerppaa...love-aa ,aasaiyaa ...veru ethaavathaa theriyalai.."endru konjiya padi sollikkonde,meemndu idli maathiri uppi iruntha kannaththil ' poch ','poch'nnu muththamida,...saththam kadal alai saththaththai meeri kettathu.

Ammavukku vekkam vanthiruchu pola.Ennidam irunthu vilahinaal.Enakku ennadaa ithu... vaayai koduththu kaariyaththai keduthuttomo'?nnu payanthen.Aanaa payanthathu maathiri illaamal, amma padahil saainthu kaalhalai madakki,ennai than madiyil thalli ,kuninthu en kannaththil muththam koduththu....cheei pokkiri ,...enakkum vaishuva?"

Ammaavin azahiya mulaihal en thalaiyil mutta,antha suhaththil naan ulahaiye marakka"Amma intha pirachinaikku naalu vazi irukkummaa.Neengale ethu best'nnu mudivu panni seiyunga."endru solli,Ammaavin iru kaihalaiyum izuththu en kazuththai sutrikkondu... "Ammaa,naan onnu kettaa thappaa eduththukka maattiye?" "Ennadaa?" "Nee enakku muththam koduththa maathiri naan unakku muththam kodukkavaa?" "Ithennadaa kelvi.Nee ammaannu paasamaa muththam koduththaalum sari...illainnaa etho eerppu'nnu sonniye ,athukkaaha muththam koduththaalum sari.Koduththukkoda"endru sonna ammaavin kazuththai vazaiththu,aval vaayodu vaai kavvi,ithazhalai kadiththu,aval echilai urinchik kudiththu,huuuum...hummm...huuuumm endru en vaaikkulle moochu mutta seithu viduvikka... "Appaadaa....ippadiyaadaa moochu mutra azlvukku,vaayai amukkarathu...pokkiri.Pollaathavandaa nee.Sari athu pohattum.Mmani enna aachu?nNaama inge en payanthu payanthu ukkaanthukkittu irukkanum?Veettukku poi, ange night muzukka ukkaanthu pesalaamille.Vaadaa ezunthuru."

Kilambi vaziyile tiffen saappittu vittu ,varum vaziyil,ammaa vazakkaththai vida nerukkamaai,en muthuhile moththamaai azunthi amara..antha suhaththil veedu vanthu sernthom.

Veettirkku vanthathum, antha uppu thannee poha kulithom.

"Ammaa ippothaan udambu sillunnu irukku.Nighty pottu ,free-aa irungalen. "Ammaa udane muham sivanthu"Rommapaththaan akkarai.Visayam therinche nighty poda solre?

"Nighty-le thaan koththu koththaa kaaichirukkirathu,kulungi asaiyirathu nallaa theriyum."

"cheeei...hhummm.Nighty pottaa ungappanukku rumba pidikkum.Appuramaa thoonga rendu mani neram aaidum.Maru naal late-aa thaan ezunthirukka mudiyum.Naan pudavaiye kattikirendaa."Vetkaththudane ennai paarkaamale sonnaal.

"Oho...appadiyaa sangathi.Aanaa vaaraththukku naalainthu naal nighty-thaannu ninaikkirenn"nathum ,ammaa thirumbi en thalaiyil 'nak' nnu kutti"mmmm...athellaam kavanichu vai .Erumai maadu.Koodiya seekkiram unakku kalyaanam pannanum.Sari vaadaa padukkalaam".

Ammaavum naanum beach-kku poi jolly-aa irunthuttu vanthu ,kuliththu en padukkaiyile padukka... ammaavum melliya cotton pudavai katti,oru side-aa thirumbi nindru, irandu kaihalilum paal tumbler-oda vanthu ennai kudikka sonnaal.

Appothu cotton pudavai katti irunthathaal,pudavai munthaanai side-il nandraaha vilahi 'kum' endru side pose therinthathai paarththu' rasiththukkonde,athilirunthu paal kudippathaaha ninaiththukkondu' paal kudikka,....athai kavaniththa ammaa,"inge ennadaa paarvai,?..ithilernthu kudikkarathaa nenaippo? Tumbler-I paaththu kudidaa, paal sinthidap pohuthu." endru solli , avalum kudichu padukka mani 11 aanathu.Iruvarum ore padukkaiyil paduththom.

Appaadaa kulicha pirahu konjam nallaa irukku.Antha ponnu vaishnavi saappittaalo illaiyo?Naalaiku varuvaalaa."Dai...ennamo vazi irukkunnu sonniye... thookkam varalainnaa sollen."

"Ammaa enakethu thookkam .Muthal vazi ,rendu peraiyum kooppittu kannaa pinnaannu thitti vilakki vaikkalaam"

"Mmm"

"Rendu... vaishnavikku koodiya seekkiram kalyaanam pannidalaam."

"Mmm"

"Moonu.... kandukkaame ,ekkedaavathu kettup pongannu, kandum kaanaame vittudalaam."

"Mmm"

"Naalu ...pazikku paziyaa, avangale poraamai padura alavukku, ethaavathu seiyalaam."

Intha naalule, ethu work out aahumnu? yosanai pannungammaa."

Ammaavin iduppil kai pottu kaathukku aruhil solla,ammaavum en thalai mudihalai kothikkonde"Dai...neye solludaa... ethu best vazi."

Ammaavin iduppil kaal pottu, konjam irukkikkonde"Ammaa ,onnu onnaa paaren."

"Mmm"

"Muthal vazippadi, sandai pottaa asingamaathaan irukkum.Solla mudiyaathu.Athanaale rendu perum innum mosamaa pohaththaan vaaippu irukku.En kai iduppil irunthu angum, ingum ali pain thathu.

"Aammandaa...antha sirukkikku kozuppu athiham.Ungappanukkum thaan athanaale sandai vendaam."

"Rendaavathu vaishuvukku kalyaanam panni vachidalaam'nnaa ippothaan vayasu 18.Vaish enakku kalyaanam vendaamnu sollittaa naama onnum panna mudiyaathu."

"Moonaavathu,kandukkaame vittuttaa...innum jolly'nnu nammaa kan ethirileye edaakoodamaa iruppaanga.Naama kandum kaanaame irukkanum.Ippave un manasu enna paadu paduthunnu enakku theriyum.Appuram innum kastamaaidum."

"Aamaandaa.Nee solrathum sari.Avangalai kandichu vaikkanum.Illainnaa thulir vittu podium."endru sonna ammaavin iduppil kai koduththu ennodu serththu anaiththukkonden.

Ammaavin menmaiyum ,ammaavin vaasamum,aval azahum ennai ennavo seiya...innum nandraaha anaiththu,irukki muththamaaha kodukka kaihal thuru thurukka kattup paduththi...

"Naalaavathaa,avangalaip paththi kavalaip padaame,naamum avangalai maathiri anniyonniyamaa irunthuttaa,Ithukkum ,athukkum sariyaa pochunnu manasu lesaaidum.Ennammaa solre?"

"Aamaandaa ithuvum sarithaan"endru etho ninaivil sonnaval ,sonnathai unarnthu pathari"Dai...Dai...enna sonne..? Naanum neeyum appadi irukkirathaa?Aasaiyaip paaru... aasaiyai.Etho pakkaththile paduththu ,avangalai thiruththa oru vazi solludaannaa...ennaiye un pondaatti aakkikka paakkiriye?"

"En enakku neenga pondaattiyaa irukka koodaathaa?"

"Atheppadidaa,mahanukke ammaa pondaatti aahirathu."

"Appanukke ,maha pondaatti aahum pothu,ammaa mahanukku pondaatti aahak koodaathu?"

"Logic ellaam sarithaan.Aanaa pondaatti'ngirathuthaan pidikkalai."

"Appo...vappaattiyaa irunga."

"Un naakkai vetti kooru podanum .Enna pesuthu paar erumai."endru sonna ammaavai izuththu anaiththu ,muhamengum muththa mazaiyaaha pozinthen.

Ennai thalli vitta ammaa,en echil patta than muhaththai thudaiththukkondue sinungi"Irudaa...avar varattum solren."endraal.

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ShasveeShasveeabout 14 years ago

Buvana, nalam..nalam ariya aaval.Ungal kadhai mindum yeppa thodarum? Kadhai miga aaruvathudan virumbi padikirain.Inum idhai polavaiy inum naraiyya kadhaigal tanglishlai ninggal yeludhanum.Ungal thiramai, kadhaikul kadhai, vasagargal yedhir paarkadha thirupangal (flash back), kudambathin padukai uruvugal elam arpudhamaaga irukku padika padika.Kadhai mindum marupadiyum thodara en manam kanindha anbu vaalthukal..

MithundaMithundaabout 14 years ago
Great writing

Buvana, u r a very talented writer. Ungal ezhuthil thamizh culture prathibalikkirathu. ungal thairamikku en vanakkangal. neengal intha kadhaigal ezhuthuvathil neram selavalippthu ungal pernthanmaiyai kaatukirathu. niraya pergal ungalal inbam perugiraargal. ungal menmaiyana paniyai thodarnthu seyyungal.

ShasveeShasveeabout 14 years ago
aaha..

Buvana, epadi indha madhuri.Unga kadhai padika padika, nala oru karpanai kudiya inba kaamatthu movie madhuri iruku.Kadhai romba interestingga podhu.Mamanar marumagal, annan pondatti ipdinnu dhool kilapuringa.En vaalthukal..Sashvee

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
superb

super-aa ezhutharinga. pls continue

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

Thanks for continuing the story with the same speed and hot. Thanks for the time and hard work you are spending for the joy of the readers.

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