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She moans in excitment as I suck at her nipple and nibble on each one gently, then roughly. She digs her nails into my back. I take my mouth away from her nipple and let out a moan and thrust into her pussy harder. I watch as the back of her head digs into the pillow. She arches her back and begs me not to stop. I breathe hard and contain myself from stopping to rest. She keeps her hands locked on my back, still nailed in. Her moaning, getting louder by the second, I feel her orgasim run around my cock, sending a sensational feeling throughout my body also.
I flop down beside her on my back and try to relax and take in what had just accured. I close my eyes and put my hand on my stomach. Cara puts her hand on top of mine and slowly moves it farther down. I open my eyes and watch her hand grab my cock. I feel more blood rushing down, exciting my dick from the beautiful woman grasping it with her soft, feminine hand.
I look back at her to find her smiling as she moves her body down to the bottom of the bed. I watch as she kisses the head, licking every inch of it that she can. I hold back her hair as she deep throats me unexpectedly, making me the dizziest man in the world, I place my hand on the back of her neck to keep my cock down in her throat as I let go of everything and let it slide down her throat. I release her head when I finish and let my hands fall to my sides and I close my eyes again.
Barely able to hear what is surrounding me, I fall to sleep.
I open my eyes quickly, finding a blanket over me from my waist down. I blink repeatidly to make everything clear. I sit up to find my bags still on the floor, but Cara's aren't in sight.
I get out of the bed and pick my boxers up off the floor then put them on. My eye catch something over on the table beside my cell phone. I walk over to it. It's a piece of paper.
I pick it up and read, "Thanks for the night. You were wonderful. Cara." Not being able to keep my grin from escaping, I crumbble the paper up and throw it into the trash can.
I was finally satisfied.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoThis is the first story you've written that you have also finished. Congratulations. And it doesn't involve rape either! You still need a proofreader. Don't rely on 'spell check' , or any computer software. They cannot tell you what the correct word is. 'Bored' vs board. Too vs to or two etc. You need to work on grammer and composition plus spelling and punctuation. This is a good story.
TomorrowTodayover 11 years agoNormally I would, but it's much rarer to see someone who doesn't skimp on the story and presents everything in such realistic detail without becoming overly florid. You have a simple, straightforward style that lets much of the story, as Hemingway said about icebergs and narratives, lie hidden beneath the surface but plainly there. I came here after reading your new submission, and I like both very much. I've become a very fast fan. You respect your characters and let things play out quite naturally and believably. Kudos! Five stars.
PrincessErinover 12 years agoDefinitely one of the better stories written on here but I agree with the last poster then you need an editor and spell checker.
The dialogue and character development were amazing and your description of the sex was very hot.
I can not wait to read more from you.
