Request for criticism
The main reason I have been publishing stories here is to become a better writer. One of the things that would be helpful would be to have readers offer their evaluation of my work. I'd like nothing better than to hear what you have found wrong or didn't enjoy about my stories.
If you didn't think the characters were constant or that the story line didn't engage you or if there was too much graphic sex (or not enough) I'd appreciate hearing about it. Perhaps I
