by rampant404
Nice visual flow and pacing. I love family dynamics in this one; particularly the overall men's response: "What are they fighting about again?" /"Quiet, just don't make any sudden moves." / "So storm's over?"/ "Nope, just waiting for the next one." / "Well, at least they like sex, so we're good. " :D
We men know when to shut up and just do as we're told. I think it is a survival instinct.