All Comments on 'etched in poetry'

It expresses your thoughts and emotions well.

Yes, living life to the fullest is hard to do. I feel you here my friend. I see you wiping that book cover off and just stairing at it. I love how you express your feelings here too. Just a great look at your etched poetry ~

More Please ~

I'll ignore the lack of capitalization to puncutation to say this is a good poem. I like the ideas you shared in this piece.

What power,

what feeling;

what the hell was he thinking?

Good JOB! sandspike

Great attitude and lovingly presented. A nice read.

Tattler

Jenna, I love this one it really shows depth and a true understanding of the trials we all go through.

Keep up the good work. You are surely a sparkling Diamond waiting to be discovered!

d2

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,500 poems.

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