All Comments on 'Foreplay'

You wicked wicked girl. You clearly crave the spanking you deserve... I loved the imagery in this poem, Soph. Thanks for sharing it with us.

Very nice. You protest too much.

You really captured the sense of the deisres of a tormenter. Great write!

Great Poem.

You know me too well, and we've never even met.

I really enjoyed this when

i read it on the thread and I

know how hard you've worked to

get the poem to this point. You've

done a wonderful job.

Erotic as hell and very

very sexy!

Great job sj.

~ JC

Loved the tease. Good write.

I know you've done well

when I feel your need;

and I seek to express it

in words of my choosing...

You inspire.