All Comments on 'A Cloak of Lies Ch. 01'

Sweet Witch - you were right the first time - it is popular demand. We have really missed your stories and this is just a sample of your greatness and talent. Can hardly wait till they publish the book. Your web site is fantastic. Keep up the great work as there are few writers with your talent these days.

I know I've asked for it, and it looks like I got it. Thank you so much for putting this back here.

I've read this story in its entirety...or as entire as you have it on the other site....several times. I do hope you continue it, perhaps for NaNo?

so glad to see one of your works back up..I have cont. to check your site hoping something would be posted..and finally!! Thank you

But I just don't understand what right the husband has to be angry about her moving on and finding love again. He'd "only given in to his baser instincts on a few occasions"-oh, how noble, considering he knew he was still married. But he's treating her like sh*& because she eventually believed that he was dead and got a new life?

Just how smart could Niko be if he didn't expect his wife to move on after 8 years. If he continues to exhibit these kinds of weakness I don't expect his character to very intriguing, or enjoyable. But the writing is very enjoyable. Now to read on....anon jerry

I'm fed up with this Niko asshole already! Not really interested in reading this x6particular story anymore. Perhaps I'll find some other work of yours.

A great start to an interesting story ... It certainly grabs your attention! I read it naked with a drink in hand ... Ha ... During 'a naked drinking party' ... Seriously, I'm looking forward to reading the next installment! Thanks, David.

And he wanted to save her why?