All Comments on 'A Mother's Help Ch. 09'

Complete a revenge or payback ending that leaves the women hurting emotionally & financially. Create dynamic payback for the two males who contributed to this cheating deal. Do not do a happy ending with the husbands taking them back.

we need you to write the ending of this...... These women eed to be taught a lession. and so do the men they cheated with... Tom and Frank are good men and deserve some revenge from this

PEOPLE GET KILL FOR LESS,FOR WHAT THESE TWO WOMAN DID.

will you pleqase write the ending for this...... I would like to know where this goes from here

Seriously, no author in her right mind would cut these cheating lying wife sluts a break without making their husbands into wussie wimpy braindead asses. Having said that I suspect you will bend the husbands into just that in the name of sickness and cuckolding (as you have before). There is really no suspense here given your history which sucks realitywise. Yes, it's just a story but you are supposed to make it somewhat believeable for us to respect your work and you as an author. Unless of course, you only plan to be appreciated by only the sickies! Sickies, get happy as here it cums is my prediction. Well respect or sick - not a tough choice but lets see----

You write such hot stories, but why do they always end with bloodshead and death. You really know how to screw up an erotic story.

why asking these whores what they want?destory them and their lovers.no money for the wives and sue the lovers.you let them off to easy.

at least betty did not fall back on lies and 1/2 truths, but that does not cleanse her or purify her. she apparently was not all that interested even in getting her spouse's interest. the other, a trolop and better off w/o husband, at least the present husband. daughter will just as inclined and the new guy will be one of several.

You're getting the names of your characters mixed up... confuses the hell outta the readers..

by confusing names.Are you on drugs? Pistolpackinpete

He wasn't fucking Betty much because she was fucking a 10 inch cock all the time and just tossing her husband a few mercy fucks with a cunt so large that he could not feel the walls.

I agree with Cantbuymy. It is bullshit for Betty to say that Tom didn't want sex. Whether she realized it or not she was not showing the same interest in sex with Tom as she was in 10"Jack. For 20+ years Betty got Tom to pay the bills and she got Jack to give her pleasure. After she started getting packed by Jack why go back? She wanted to keep Tom from being hurt.......my ass. She didn't want to lose her meal ticket. If she didn't think she was doing anything wrong then why hide it for 20 fucking years. Tom doesn't miss sex with his wife because she was a dead fish. She wasn't getting excited because she couldn't even feel him. It was hard for Tom to get excited when Betty was either reading or snoring. How could he get excited when it felt like he was making love to a cold and empty can of beans?

'Names matter' .