All Comments on 'A New Beginning'

Keep going!!!!

I hope in a few years when I'm in my 60's I can still do it like Fred.

Boyd

Goodness yes, please continue this story. I've been enjoying a young mother and I could only imagine what her daughter must be like!

Mary and Fred make a perfect pair for Overland. He does right by them and for us. It takes a senior to understand Fred's problems. Of coarse Mary, if they are still interested all they have to do is to lie on their backs. but Mary takes an active part. Glad you decided to continue this tale

Keep it going. Your writing shows a great deal of personal feeling. Where do you go from here?

I would love to read more and next time have mary and jessica together with mary seducing jessica .

Pat Murray

Atlanta,Ga.

You cannot leave the story there. So much is unresolved

I loved this story. I am a fan of Overland. I have just finished the epic, well 30 chapters anyway, and I loved it.

But please edit this story with more care. Is his name Fred or Harry? I suspect it is Fred, so how the fuck did Harry creep in?