All Comments on 'A Room with a View'

hated to see the end, i love to read stories with plot ,hope there will be more to this , waiting pataintly ,nathan in georgia

To mushy for my taste with to many sweety pie's and precious this and that and holy crap - sooner or later he was going to smother her. And then there she was 7 years with/out and he pulls out his trusty "nine" inches out and plugs her hole ! Sure and Donkeys fly to.! She would almost if not, would of just been like a Virgin after 3 and he sticks a big nine in her. Next you want me to believe in Santa & Xmas. and the Tooth Fairy.

I much enjoyed the emotions and loving in this story - but I did feel that some of the dialogue was over-the-top just a bit. Much of the dialogue was also a bit repetitive. However, I much enjoyed it and an excellent, caring story for your first posting.

A wonderful and touching story which I totally enjoyed!

I really got into the whole romantic, teasing buildup to the finale. Just a quick note. Some of your descriptive words don't fit together. I don't think I've ever seen anyone calmly cavort. I'm not sure that one can have indecisive thighs and a convoluted body would have to be painful. Keep up the work though. You are on the right track.

I loved this story...

Really? "The rubber of my uninterested tires leisurely embraced the old-fashioned cobblestone driveway" "My weary soul impetuously tried to soak in all of the stunning beauty that surrounded the exquisite home before turning off the engine."

You really ought to enter the Bullwer-Lytton Fiction Contest.

“It was a dark and stormy night; the rain fell in torrents — except at occasional intervals, when it was checked by a violent gust of wind which swept up the streets (for it is in London that our scene lies), rattling along the housetops, and fiercely agitating the scanty flame of the lamps that struggled against the darkness.” — Edward George Bulwer-Lytton, Paul Clifford (1830)

Or maybe you're being paid by the word? Jay-sus, what a verbose disaster.

This is a saga. Never ending one.

What long winded drivel. Learn to edit, and to write dialog. People do not address each other by name each time they open their mouths.

Just wonderful but it did not last long enough.

Thank you for a lovely story.

The word is ShuDDer / ShuDDered !!!!

More than a dozen times here, and it's SO wrong.