All Comments on 'A Window of Opportunity'

spelling errors distracting.

follow, not fallow.

fucking or fuckin', not fucken.

Loved the story. Made me so horny.... I'd love to be your sharon.... hehe....

Dear Grammar perfection police... Sorry I do not have an editor yet and have tried three times unsuccessfully to find one. Grammar is not my friend and if it is yours, congratulations. If your OCD like tendencies will not allow you to muddle through some errors, typos, and the odd omitted word I apologize and hold no grudge knowing that you have moved on to more well established writers like Chekov, Tolstoy or Hemingway. Please keep in mind that this is an amateur writing site and if you are compelled to correct peoples spelling and grammar, you might satisfy your correction cravings by becoming an English teacher. I can assure you that if you can will yourself to focus on the story itself, you will have a more enjoyable experience.