by masterhypnotist
So-so grade mind control story. Very short.
You've written far better than this though.
Very beautiful and romantic story. A little short, but good work just the same
It made me pretty hot for awhile, but then a little ill. He never really let's her realize that she is under his hypnotic influence. Its great to solve a problem or enhance a little fun, but this is almost a story of repeated rape. No, this is not good.