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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Great story

Hope there will be more chapters.

keairankeairanabout 13 years ago
Great!

But the change from the build-up to the sex seemed incredibly abrupt. It also seemed very hurried as well.

ansdguyansdguyabout 13 years ago
No hotter than this one...

that's for sure. I do see a dark cloud coming, though. Daddy will fall in love with his baby. Then what?

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Talented

Fascinating, clever and hot, I enjoyed your tale and look forward to your other stories.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
write more

you're so good at writing stories. please write more

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