All Comments on 'Be Careful What You Ask For Ch. 01'

This story is a mind pleaser. It could stand to be a little longer but a Great Start.

I hate to agree with one of the others who commented, but this is ultimately a story of rape. For that reason alone, it wasn't a turn-on for me.

As for the commentary, I don't understand why there is so much hatred expressed on this site. It's a fucking porn site. Lighten up. Why the hell are so many people SO angry because they read a free story they don't like? Is someone forcing them to read these stories? Are they so pissed off because they wasted a whole five minutes? I really don't get it.

I like you style of writing. Beginning as you did and then rolling back around to it again after giving pertinent details was a nice touch. As for it being rape.... By law, maybe. Not exactly something sheilah was too anxious to report even while the "rape" was in progress. Well written with only a couple little typos.

5 stars.

Great story..!

Looking forward to reading the rest..!