by TallBlondeGretchen
look forward to this series. looks like your going to take it slow and detailed
I like it...but it seems a little slow and repetitive...hopefully something will happen in second installment...
if part 1 is best you have to get someone interested please just stop
I don't know if it's your intent, but the entire story thus far seems predicated on a rather racist premise. I've met strong people of all races and being insulting and demeaning doesn't make you strong, it makes you uncouth. So far I'm unimpressed with the direction of the story and the attitudes presented therein.
How in the world does this one little black female just dominate an entire office. I'm going to continue to read looking for the connection where she can actually help this failing company but, I can't see a Boss being so weak. Wow
Please just stop! Nothing remotely appealing about this story. A waste of time reading.
It was a little long, but I can certainly see this chapter as an erotic build up of control and domination before the sexual domination begins. Can't wait to read more. Hurry Up!
You have a some real talent...keep writing.....
This was really, really long and rather racist. It left me cold, and I'm mixed race!
Really? She is scared of this dwarf? I dont get it but so far the story is interesting..
I think your fantasy story is well written and one of my favorites, don't listen to those
who criticize your motives. Reality and fantasy mixed together make for great
tales. Love the eroticism and the way you are portraying domination and submission.
Thanks again, please keep these types of stories coming!
Whatever floats your boat, turns your crank, or gets you off the ground. Or as it says in the Bible," judge not, lest ye be judged"
nothing hotter than a sexy black teen girl dominating a white women.
What a useless bad written story. I over looked a lot of it because it was so boring and couldn't even finish it
I Love Dominant Black Women, I Married One!
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Hallo Gretchen!
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In Europe I knew many women like you... ohhh, not as tall as you, I was usually taller at 5'10 + with B-cup breasts, with the physique of a runner, and at that time I was 143 lbs... but now since I started hand to hand combat training I've put on a few pounds..
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Thank-you for sharing your story with all of us, 5-Stars and 5-Orgasms,,, Yes!
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