by marjoriesquire
While the story was okay, your categorization is WAY off. Even if this is a part off from a "incest" story, NO INCEST took place in this part. I read only incest, and when I read shit that doesn't have it, it's a waste of time for me. Yes she fucked her son, but in the other part of the story. In this part there is a recollection of something she did when he was a wee-one, but past that it's how she lost her virginity. In no way is that incest. You should have marked it "First Time" "Erotic" or even "Non-consensual" but NOT INCEST!
The story is well writen,but it just didn't go forward with much new story. Training his mother will be really good to read.I hope the next chapter is posted soon. Thanks .....Rich
What was that crap? Part 1 was strange and then you come up with this crap. What a let down.
I do like your weaving of details, adds depth and a added rich flavour.
Kinda got lost on track. Mom (Cathy) remembering her past is fine but you should have had her Memories bring Michael into them.