All Comments on 'Cathy's Pleasure Pivot Ch. 02'

by marjoriesquire

Sort by:
  • 6 Comments
motherfucker74motherfucker74over 14 years ago
FAILED!!!

While the story was okay, your categorization is WAY off. Even if this is a part off from a "incest" story, NO INCEST took place in this part. I read only incest, and when I read shit that doesn't have it, it's a waste of time for me. Yes she fucked her son, but in the other part of the story. In this part there is a recollection of something she did when he was a wee-one, but past that it's how she lost her virginity. In no way is that incest. You should have marked it "First Time" "Erotic" or even "Non-consensual" but NOT INCEST!

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 14 years ago
Good writing skills, just not much progress

The story is well writen,but it just didn't go forward with much new story. Training his mother will be really good to read.I hope the next chapter is posted soon. Thanks .....Rich

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
What the hell?????

What was that crap? Part 1 was strange and then you come up with this crap. What a let down.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Not Worth Reading

Why bother writing rubbish like that ?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Lovely weave......

I do like your weaving of details, adds depth and a added rich flavour.

C_frommnC_frommnover 10 years ago
You

Kinda got lost on track. Mom (Cathy) remembering her past is fine but you should have had her Memories bring Michael into them.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous