All Comments on 'Changing Flavors'

The story was OK - you may have overdone it a bit with the street language. As it is, if you use some street slang there is NO REASON to explain what it means......the story will get the point across. You had a few spelling and grammatical errors, but the killer mistake was changing the character's name from Nicole to Kendra. A reader can't shake that from their mind as they try to enjoy the story. I read to the end expecting a Nicole character to pop up, but the story ended and I realized it was a basic mistake of amateur writers - live the story and keep the characters straight!!

I KNOW WHAT U MEANT BY HVING JUST 1 FLAVOR, THEN I TRIED ANOTHER KIND...... NOW IM WITH MY BLACK RACE..... I GUESS ITS TRUE WHAT THEY SAY, "ONCE U GO BLCK, U WILL NEVER GO BCK.".... KEEP UP THE GOOD WRK.

I WOULD LIKE FOR U 2 EMAIL ME.... sweet_luver1111@yahoo.com

MY NAME IS TANYA..

Your stories are great...Just need to check your spelling once in a while. Keep 'em cummin'

I loved the story, great work!!!!!! Everyone talks about grammar and all that other shit, IT WAS A GREAT STORY, can we leave it at that. If it pisses you off so much about the grammar mistakes, stop reading the DAMN STORY!!!!!!!

Like i said before great job

Fuck everyone else

thanks

just cummed to it

This story was awesome!

Great story love it

This story is amazing. I wanna fuck kendra banging body.

Very sweet and straight up fun, but lots of spelling errors