by XXNoraJeanXX
Love the characters and would love to read more of their story!
I commend you, you wrote in an extremely hot and sometimes graphic manner, which is excellent coming from a man to a woman.
Generally (Most) women write on (ramble) or romanticize in a harlequin novel fashion.
Your writing most definitely piqued my interest.
Kudos ;)
Carlos
I enjoyed your story. I loved your characters. I loved that you turned something so innocent to something so kinky. I need more of these two. I hope you are working on it already. ;) Thank you! Letty
I clicked on this story on impulse, half expecting not to enjoy what it was about but anticipating a guilty pleasure... I was shocked by how much I liked it! Thank you for sharing, this has got me thirsting for more...
I loved it, great hot fucking with the milk thrown in for good measure, an unusual angle on something so simple.
As for the comment "harlequin novel fashion. Your writing most definitely piqued my interest" ... what a load of crap.
write more they have to meet up again in a different location.
I really, really enjoyed this story! I love the lactation theme but the characters were also fun and believable, the language very colorful and descriptive and in general your storytelling rhythm and style kept me hooked and hot! I will actually re-read it when in "need". ENCORE!
Vee
This is such an awesome story. I would love to see this one continued as a series.
OMG!!!! I LOVE YOUR STORIES... YOU HAVE A GREAT WAY OF MAKING SOMEONE VISUALIZE EVERYTHING KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!
Please give these two a part two. I quite simply need it! I wish my breasts could do this.
This is great fun and a fabulous theme. I would have given it five but for the mistakes in the text. I look forward with anticipation to the next instalment.
pretty good,although I'm not really sure it belonged in the fetish section, since mother's milk is not really a turnon for him. It could have used better editing, not just typos but some word choices. All in all, pretty good.
Yes! Excellent storyline and characters.
Very arousing and moving.
Love your pace.
That is one of the sexiest stories I have read. I also love the conflict both of the characters are experiencing. the way the open up and the changes they go thru.
This story is awesome. Great story line and very good build up.
Please write another chapter! Don't leave us hanging! In the need of more! I love this kind of story. Keep up with the great stories & hope to see more from you!
I loved every word of this story. Brought back lovely memories. Then the possibility of him having bred her took it up to another level. Bravo!
The idea of a sexy, young wet nurse is erotic. Christian is an uncaring, rude asshole
Clearly they aremade for each other. Emily had shied away from sex for so long, fearing men might reject her for her body's wetproductivity and Christian discover quite understand it yet but it will happened how profoundly arousing her milky overflow is for him.
The thought of keeping her already popped up in his mind once and while he pushed it away then his feelings prepare for this. A serial womanizer is about to give in and let the rivers of her sweet milk carry him into the new lands of fatherhood and marital sex. He doesn't quite understand it yet but he's floating there already.