All Comments on 'Christmas, Counseling & Cell Phones'

Another good one. I always look forward to your stories! Thanks!

Loved the story. Has an interesting and different story line.

It has been a long time since I have enjoyed one of your well written tales. Thanks for this one. I hope your pencil has more like this.

Author - when a talented imaginative mind decides to weave a story of marital consequence that fairly metes out justice, I look to your abilities.<P>

I wish that others would tap this reservoir of emotion that has several million lifelike variations that could fairly portray reasonable reality.<P>

The storyline evidences the past experiences of many and the fears of most but in the hands of fairness not always experienced - here or in real life.<P>

Thanks Author - You are looked forward to!!!<P>

With Very High Regard

I hate these preachy stories on an EROTIC, FICTIONAL, story site. Yeah, we all know adultery is bad, immoral, and can have negative consequences. Got it. Check.

Revenge on a cheating spouse stories always get the righteous morons here all worked up with affirmation. Here comes a clue bat: WRONG VENUE. Write these for your kids or your church. The audience for these morality tales are totally fudged up if they are on THIS site looking for moral guidance. Totally fudged up.

WRONG. He/she/it is full of shit. Must be a brit that came over to get work since they don't have any in England, I found it refreshing to read a story in the morning by a husband with balls. First of all he was quick on the uptake. No British wimp confusion and denial or crying and retching...Notice how they always do this. Next he set the two up. He did not let the guy off scott free. He didn't freeze and walk away to get drunk. He got even. He even found a way for her family to know the truth at Xmas time no less. The only thing I can find fault with is that the husband didn't beat the shit out of Chris. He should naturally file a sexual harrassment suit against her company for allowing it and he should sue them for alienation of affection...That would have insured that both would have been fired and the husband could have taken a real long vacation with the companies money. Bet the ex wife and Chris would find getting a good job hard after that

Enjoyed this one very much. I liked the time frame as well as the emotion that was displayed.

I believe a sequel would be welcomed. I would like to see this story from the wife's perspective. It could answer the question of why as well as what she was feeling upon her discovery. Was it being caught, humilation in front of her parents, or some loss of the marriage that she thought she had protected while playing.

Also, who was she and what would she do now.

thanks again for another well written story

ohio -you the man. I absolutely loved this story. So well constructed and believeable. It fulfilled all my revenge fantasies and gives me a warm glow.

Anyone who didn't like your story is a moron wimp loser with substantial self esteem issues.

Loved it! Good writing and well thought out plot. She got what she deserved.

Just Wrong got it wrong. This is not moral story, it is a REVENGE story.

I like it.

PW

Is there anyone who doesn't love your stories? They grab at our deepest emotional level.

Adultry hurts so much because our spouse is the one person in the world who vows to be loyal, to love and respect us. We open ourselves to our spouse more than we do to any other person. When we find that they have betrayed us the pain goes deeper than anything we could experience. You write such satisfying stories because it helps us to resolve that pain. Thank you so much.

Another of your great stories to start the new year!Thank you.

AS I read I wondered could this be me... Believe me I am watching and taking notes

You've become a solid teller of tales.

I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing, Ohio.

good emotional description.

Very, very good. Thanks.

About time we had another one of these. Just a simple story about a man who takes direct action. Looking forward to your next.

My only complaint is thats its to short. Would have liked it to keep going. Thanks

Another -"Revenge, Anger, and Dull Story that belongs on some angry, possessive, type website.

congrats for the great story. i personally feels that it is an inspirations for all loving husbands out there. this is what a real man should do. willing to take actions and let go. no point in keeping the marriage if there are no more trust in it. a good husband deserved more than a slut wife. thank you for the eye opener.

congrats for the great story. i personally feels that it is an inspirations for all loving husbands out there. this is what a real man should do. willing to take actions and let go. no point in keeping the marriage if there are no more trust in it. a good husband deserved more than a slut wife. thank you for the eye opener.

I dont get it. why would he bother go to the counselling? whgat is the purpose of that in this story?

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If this author left out that Entire section the husband still could of tracked the other guy down pulled the gun and still pulled the same stunt at the xmas gathering.

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even worse this story has No ending. The confrontational

scene is powerfuil and dramatci... its TOO strong to be left hanging.

How did this piece of crap get a "hot" rating?

Isn't it interesting that those "intellectuals" who condemn this writer are too ashamed to post their names. That says more about them than any comment they could ever leave.

And by the way, Ohio - I liked the story. Great yarn. Thanks for sharing.

Could have been a little longer but I enjoyed it 100%. Thanks for writing.

Compact prose, believable characters (though I thought the boyfriend's long recitation was a bit unbelievable), and a solid plotline. Well done, I thank you.

Nicely paced and tightly written. A very satisfying story.

if i was him id not worry about paying for a divorce id let her do that...id just find me a nice woman who likes t ofuck and move her in ...or fuck them and send them home ....that way he can do a bunch as he decides what he wants to do ...hopefully chris will let darlene move in with him as if it was my daughter id tell the bitch to stay in a motel i wouldnt take her in daughter or not....maybe shed die before she got around to divorcing me and i could still get her retirement ...any way id with draw most of what we had in the bank as i needed it more than she did as im the one with the bills to pay to keep our house going ...she has a job and a man to help her ..id leave her maybe a 4th of what was there ...open new accts in my name only ...and yes fuck every woman i could get in bed ...as for eileen the counselor that is one bill i dont need anymore ...so id inform her that we had finally came to an agreement and didnt need her help anymore ..that is unless she needed a fuck which my wife had so generouslly said i could provide her with as the wife now had someone else that shed rather fuck than me ...i hope she has a great xmas

and i forgot as someone else said .. he should have sued chris for alienation of affection and her company for allowing it ...then used the money to take a nice long vacation on their money ...and yes they would also be fired for that and yes how hard would they find it getting another job... great read ohio

Tight and elegant writing - a classic revenge story. My friend Harry, this time I am confused by your feedback. The Counseling was going on for a while prior to the accident of the mixed cell phones and getting the message from the lover. <P>

The husband's insistence on counseling and the wife's reluctance to do the same go to the characterization of both. He is sincere and dedicated to the marriage; she is manipulative self centered etc. As far as his suspicions about her cheating prior to the phone call, it was just his speculation and there was no supportive evidence until the phone call. <P>

After all, up to the point of the phone call, the wife DID agree to both of his requests (being checked and to the counseling). <P>

If the phone call did not happen and counseling continued to yield no results he could have sent detectives after her, but choosing counseling first does not make for a bad story IMO.

It's been many days since there was a good LW with consequences story to read. This was a good story of a cool headed betrayed person. It was a delight to read as it shows what a person can accomplish in a short period of time. He had enough over the months of no love and counseling to not need time to know his feelings. The betrayal and lies were enough for anyone to know she didn’t love him in any form. It appears she had only the comfort of being married that she was trying to keep, but that would have been gone very shortly.<P>Thanks for the great entertainment.<P>PT

<p>OMG!!! I laughed so hard I thought I'd faint</p>

<p>This was the classic that pushed me over the top:</p>

<p><i>I moved to Tom, taking his hand and shaking it. "So long, Tom. I've enjoyed being your son-in-law. You and Sarah are good people, and you deserve better than this cheating slut for a daughter. Of course, I deserved better than her for a wife, too."</i></p>

<p>Classic</p>

<p>Harry, I read the same thing KOLKORE did, The husband was already going to counseling. But he went that last time because he wanted to see if he could see if she truely hiding something from him, and now if I could see it now that he's eyes were opened. And once they were, he flew into revenge mode, but he was already heading to the counseling session before before he got the phone call. That's why he was showering when the story opened. But once he knew he needed time to pull his revenge together, so he pretended everything was ok.</p>

<p>But I'm glad Ohio didn't used Alienation of affection as grounds or something. Very few states even allow it any more. Last time I check only these states allow it at all: Hawaii, Illinois, Mississippi, New Hampshire, New Mexico, North Carolina, South Dakota, and Utah and if the couple was in marriage counciling, then he would never win the suit, because he has to prove that the lover was the only reason the marriage broke up, but if they are in counseling when he finds out, then that suit flies out the window. But he could have sued her job "If" HR has a policy against extra marital affairs. I know my job/company doesn't have one. Its more of a don't ask don't tell policy around here. And I work for a huge Fortune 500 company</p>

<p>Extremely good Story Ohio, it made me laugh and god knows we needed something really funny around here lately. (^_^)</p>

-Risq

I just want you to know that they did pick up the garbage on Christmas as well as New Years in Sacramento CA

Very realistic. Well written and tight. Thanks for your contributions Ohio!

I had a bit of trouble with the idea that he could keep her "incommunicado" for that long, but the plot worked very well. Personally I prefer the reconciliation stories, like my friend I'm a romantic at heart, but if I ever marry, I fear I would be more like the husband here.

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I hope to read more from Ohio soon, I think you are a great writer!

Excellent story, Bob would be proud of you. Keep up the good work

Nice tight story with a short timeline. The timeline make it possible to control communication. Great characters and plot development. Another fine story from Ohio! Thank You!

Nice tight story with a short timeline. The timeline make it possible to control communication. Great characters and plot development. Another fine story from Ohio! Thank You!

Sorry about the Anon. mistake

For those that favor reconciliation or reconciliation at any cost may I suggest not a counselor but a mental doctor for you mental problems and lack of self esteem. This woman is worse than deceitful. She is totally in disrespect and with no loving or any other emotion for her husband. About the only thing that can be said for her is that she at least tried not to have sex with her husband so that she did not expose him to the medical risk she accepted from her lover. There is a time to bet and a time to fold, in situations like this any bet is a sucker bet.

True confessions at the Christmas family dinner. Cool! These stories may inspire me to write a parody of Paul Simon's 50 Ways To Leave Your Cheater I mean Lover...<p> Agree with Risq - the ending was funny even though I'm not sure that it was intended to be that way. I was about to say that it wasn't realistic for the slut to cut him off, but upon reflection changed my mind - I think it is realistic.

LW has been virtually dry for some time, now. When I spot a story by Ohio I always check it out, and I haven't been sorry. This one was short and very sweet. I can't understand how someone could think it needed finishing. It was a perfect ending to this type of story. What more could you expect. No children involved, and no sex for months. Time to end the charade. Nice twist. Thanks.

when you don't just write "a story" but you write it "for Literotica readers who love short and stupid stories." <p>

it's a fuckin' gibberish nonsense of a story; there's no redeeming quality of any kind: no plot, no dialogues worth hippo shit; no emotions; no realism; no nothing. <p>

it's a piece of junk that even those silly readers who gave raving "100" don't care 20 seconds after they've read it. <p>

the author IS a very decently capable writer, no doubt; but stories like these are cheap and time-wasting on both writer and reader's parts...

I agree with that statement, but for different reasons.

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When writing stories where the husband does not go along with the cheating, JPB has a habit of posting only half a story, leaving off any real reaction to the husband's leaving. Especially in a story such as this, where the author took time to include such elements as the counseling, stopping with the husband not finding out why is only half the story.

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BTW, technically what he did was kidnapping. The only reason for them not to press charges might be because then it would come out that they were using work facilities for their affair. However, since it's almost certain that knowledge of the divorce and therefore the affair will become public, the employer is almost sure to find out and fire them anyway. Since the will have lost their jobs and he humiliated there is little reason for them to not want to get their own form of revenge on him.

the story would actually become totally meaningful, despite its stupid beginning, if the HUSBAND (in the next part, say), wrote ANOTHER one from the local jail: <p>

"I want to tell you guys this, because I was stupid enouggh to do it. I went to jail, because I used a GUN to force my slut of a wife's lover into a car, to drive to her family's get together, and, at first, I thought my revenge was sweet, but later I found out those idiots turned out to have MORE BRAINS than I do and they sued me, for KIDNAPPING! Do you believe that? I was so stupid I did NOT, I tell you, I did NOT think my revenge was kidnapping; but the police --- stupid that they are --- said otherwise! <p>

"I found out they was not kiddin'; so, here I am: divorced, fired from my job,,, my boss said he's not going to have someone who pulled a gun on another person, however deviant they are, and kidnapped them at gun point...." <p>

Blah, blah, blah,,,,, <p>

Now, if Ohio, the author, would do that, then all of a sudden I will completely change my mind about this piece being nothing more than total gibberish nonesense,,, if THAT were to happen, the little story would turn out to be quite realistically tragic and believable, yes...

Not my favorite Ohio story but well written and concise,if a little on the unbelivable side.I don't understand her reluctence to divorce if she is that crazy about the guy.Good story,Thanks!

Ohio, dude, you da bomb! Forget those a*#holes, who sign "anon", & give this story the finger. This was great stuff, very tightly written, great ending. The only, I repeat the only caveat I'd have (if any), is I'd like to know what the f*&k was going through her mind, when she treated him & the marriage the way she did. Was it just simply a total disrespect, her cavalier attitude toward him or what? But that's just a quibble. Maybe the best revenge after all is to kick her cheating slutty ass to the curb, and move on w/ his life. Like PeggyT said, it's been far too long since LW has had a good cheating, w/ consequences story. I'm glad to see you're still posting; I've moved all mine to StoriesOnLine or EroticStories; could not deal w/ the "anon" jerks, who've never written or posted any work in their frustrated lives, but feel free to flame others work. Who needs it, so I moved on.

Always look for your stories, and they're a good compelling read, thank you.

As others have said, this one lends itself to a sequel, maybe his life after/ her perspective and reasons why/ the consequences, many others come to mind.

Although this one was perfectly fine as it was, stories that move on into the post separation phase seem to have a more complete feel about them. That's why this story theme is so often with chapters or sequels. The preference for many is selfish...to get a longer read of a good thing. Longer versions develope the storyline emotions out and separate more pre-event suspicion, catching-out game, anger, revenge and confrontation from the post-event pain, consequences, vengeance, renewal, regret, reconcilliation, tragedy whatever.

Anyhow, well done, and more please!!

As a writer of some of the most appalling wimp tales ever, I am overjoyed when a good writer posts a truly no wimps ending.

<p>The more fiction I read, the more I come to appreciate that some suspension of disbelief is necessary to enjoy any good story. Here I had to overlook the fact that the husband used extreme measures to force a disclosure. That he suffered no <b>immediate</b> consequences from kidnapping his wife’s lover was a crucial part of the story. It was also entirely plausible.</p>

<p>What I found particularly interesting was the backdrop of Christmas used in both the discovery and the disclosure. Statistically a disproportionate amount of cheating is discovered during holidays. Researchers surmise this is may reflect heightened strains on the cheater by their family and their lover, with both competing for attention more forcefully.</p>

<p>In any event, I enjoyed this story. In particular I laughed loudest at the very last line. Thanks for sharing it with us.</p>

I thought I would have the first Christmas story of 08, but Ohio beat me to it! I'll have to believe this is a late Xmas 07 story instead. Consequences are often fun... when they befall someone else.

I certainly agree with zeb40, the LW genre does lately seem to be suffering from kind of drought. I suspect it's partially because the genre, as presently conceived, is far too broad, comprising far too many types of stories. I sincerely urge the master of this site to consider subdividing this genre into several new and different categories. For example: "swinging,' "revenge," "cheating," etc.

Anyway, thanks, Ohio, you're right up there with the tops. Thank God there's no writer's strike in the erotic fiction industry.

Ah....your stories are pretty well put together. One question though....shouldn't they be in the gay male stories listing?

Stavo

Not to you usual standards, took the "Well this town ain't big enough for the two of us" western approach, plenty of scope here for more refined revenge I feel.

Thanks for writing

I have just written my feedback to HDK's recent story; then I realized that a lot of it applies to yours as well. I find a similar level of disconnect and misunderstanding in comments to both stories. It seems to me that there is a connection between this type of comments and the effort to craft an original plot line. I hope that the voices of those who appreciate good quality of an original story would be enough to keep you motivated!

Here the husband had an idea that there was a problem and did all he could to fix it without admitting to the obvious (that his wife was having an affair.) However thanks to the stupidity of the lover he found out and handled it in a simple yet devestatingly complete fashion. His soon to be ex-wife got humiliated in front of her family at the same time that her marriage came to a crashing end. I very much doubt Chris stuck around and if he did I get a feeling that Darlene wouldn't have been very much interested in sex for a while.................. Some are going to complain about the holding of Chris at gunpoint, but once the husband left the house, I get a feeling Chris wasn't going to call anyone. At best the publicity would endanger his job (I really doubt the company he works for is going to wink and smile at reports of sex during work hours), and the truth is that since no one was physically harmed, it would be hard to get a conviction for more than "Brandishing a firearm" which would most likely be a fine. If shots had been fired I could see the husband being in danger of serious jail time, but there was no actual violence and its a bit hard to prove kidnapping after the kidnapped person is set free when there was no ransom note or anything. I'm not saying that no crime was commited. I'm just saying that considering the circumstances its unlikely that any AG would be trying to lay multiple felonies at this man's door.......... Its a fun story and I hope to see more like this.

I don't understand these people. If you're not happy in your marriage, you ought to leave and find someone who makes you happy. Fortunately, there were no children.

Boyd

Boy how the mighty have fallen. For a fine writer like Ohio to turn out this piece of garbage is depressing. First the cliche of him picking up her cell phone,then cliche 2 dumbo without waiting to see who it is blurts out his incriminating message. Then our hero kidnaps, at gunpoint, letcherous coworker, drags him out to her family dinner and destroys her entire family while he smirks at in-laws and blasts cheating wife. Wow what a hero . i don't know who is worse, slutty cheating wife or criminal thug husband. He'll get his divorce but he may enjoy it in jail. Depressing story.

60 yearold George

Stick it where the sun don't shine.

Pretty cool story. Hey, who is that fucking soft-cock 60yo George? Is this loser for real? I find it very hard to believe that such a fucking little girly-boy somehow made it to 60 years of age. I hope you choke you fucking faggot. I know that may soud un-called for, but sometimes you need to be the yang to someones ying... heheheh. (But seriously, I really do hope he chokes)

he would have learned of it eventually, but the cell call and timing changed that, sooner. he ended the whole thing with style, and panache. wife knew how to kill a marrige, and he just confirmed it.

congratulations..... finally a story where he doesnt wimp out. very good. this hubby actually had balls in an OHIO story!!! YAY. but i still think more cerebral revenge on the wife would have been kick-ass

You usually develop your characters into people your readers care about-not this time. This was an excellent start,with an interesting plot twist, but needed development beyond the exposition

one comment was to affect their employment. reporting it to the employer may not resulted in firing, but one more act against her/him. more humiliation is not a bad thing here. still, she gave to other what she denies her husband, and probably commented on the lack of attention from him.

Your stories are way more realistic that most on here. He kept his cool and exposed the slut for what she was to her whole family.

No doubt she wanted to "make it up to him" as it was "just sex"! that she was "so sorry"!

There is no reason to cheat on a faithful spouse!

Very Good, but it looks unfinished.It' ill be good for Darlene tell her story.

I thought this was a fun ending,perfect reaction.. hehehe.. I'm with the comments Risq made, and Lazyloner said it all .. Since She wasn't giving Him sex He was already prepared to divorce .. He just toke the councelling as the last resort to change things and to find out what was wrong.. He recconized that the councelling was going nowhere.. The cell call proved to Him what was going on,and that He only had one choice and that was to divorce the Slut.. Obviously Iris at her job knew about it .. Making Chris go to the christmas diner and confess was classic .. I could not stop laughing reading it.. So was His saying good bye to His now ex Inlaws was perfect sadly there was nothing else to say,or for him to listen what she had to say ,She had all the chances to talk at the councelling exept lucky that there werent any Kids.. As for Tom , if that was my Daughter, Chris would have gotten a beating right then there and She would be out of the House so fast She would have had road rash...It would have been interesting to read Her story about what had happened, but in the end it would not have made any difference...Great story Ohio...

Epilogue:

"A couple of hours later the door bell rang. I figured it was Darlene come to beg, but instead I openned the door to find two uniformed officers. I was arrested and charged with kidnapping and assault, among other things. I spent the next 15 years being raped nightly in prison. Darlene got everything in the divorce, married her lover, and lived happily ever after."

This is a pleasant fantasy, and a so-so cheating wife story, but I prefer stories that are believable. If you think a guy could get away with kidnapping, assault with a deadly weapon, carrying a concealed weapon, etc., just because he thought his wife had cheated on him you are very wrong. I urge you to try to make future stories more plausible.

when you are in the home of your lovers family with no marks and nothing for evidence? You could make the claim and then publish your affair for all to see including your employer, but have no evidence to push to conviction. The wife in this is a worthless piece of trash and needs to be found somewhere in an alley full of winos cum.

Not bad at all, obviously no need to keep the cheating whore. Bad enough she's cheating but to cut him off is the last straw. Well, not that a long term affair isn't, LOL. I have to agree with the previous post, don't see the police being involved, no proof. Hell, what incentive does the lover have to call the police? He wasn't hurt, just embarassed. It's not like he wants to marry the bitch, she'd just cheat on him too. The entire thing might work out to his benifit, better availability and still doesn't have to be committed.

LIKE EVERYONE SAYS THERE IS NO PROVE OF KIDNAPPING, SOME OF THESE READERS ARE REALLY STUPID. GREAT STORY OHIO

Perfect, just what the cheating cunt deserved.

Perfect humilation for that cheating wench.

do something to screw with their employment as he may? Other parts of their lives as he may? At least it was clear who was naughty.

I have read many of your stories and have liked all of them, please continue on. R.T.

"I was holding a Hämmerli 208s target pistol aimed right at his chest. It wasn't all that deadly a weapon, just something I used for practice at a local target range,"

At point blank range, a .22 is as or more dangerous than a 9mm because the low recoil means that the entire 10 rd clip can be emptied into a person's torso in a few seconds with a fair degree of accuracy, almost certainly hitting major arteries and probably multiple intestinal and bowel perforations (perotinitis anyone?).

It always amazes me - both in the stories and in real life how the cheater feels it is OK to do wrong as long as no ones knows they are doing it and that they think they still love the unwitting victim while they keep it up.

There is more than one kind of love certainly, your child, you parent, your dog, but the one between spouses requires honesty and fidelity of the person - unless you go in to it with one of those open arrangements from the star which seldom seems to be the case.

Payback for not giving her hubby any sex unless forced. I was waiting to hear that lover had said to cut hubby off. When that didn't appear, one had to accept that she didn't love hubby or want sex with him any more. Now "That" in itself gave Hubby reason to embarrass her in front of the family because she could have just left him or told him he had to learn to be a willing and sexually deprived Cuck if he wanted her to stay. Damn...Exposed myself. Gotta quit reading that other crap.

I am just a simple Mud Marine so when I found out that mu ex was heating I made sure that her lovers wive an families found out and all of them are now able to look at thier severed cocks and balls when they sit to pee

I was intending to rate the story 5***** before the assault with a deadly weapon and kidnapping occured. Obviously he would go to prison for years for those major felonies.

However, the story doesn't imply he was arrested and went to prison. As such, the story was too unrealistic. He could have hired an PI and gotten photos and that would made it a very good story. However, because of the crimes he committed, the story sucks. Therefore, the story deserves the lowest rating.

don't worry about the last comment from that jackass

from reality again: the same asshole that says "police are only good for committing crimes not solving them" suddenly thinks they will make a case in this story? What a stupid asshole...

why do your stories always feel unfinished?

Not bad, except that it is unlikely her cell phone would be that similar to his. 'Custom' covers are ubiquitous any more. Not sure he could find her lover's address that easily. Most young people with cell phones do NOT maintain a house phone anymore, thus no directory listing! I suspect anyone with a Hammerli ALSO has a more substantial handgun piece or two which would be more convenient. Why not take him over to the parents' immediately, before D gets there? Let Mom tell her slut daughter her marriage is over! Or wait there with Chris until D gets in.

fuckin cock smoking nonce is more like it, typical internet hard man licking jizz from his fingers and stuffing hamsters up his ass, what a wanker.

rarely or never have home addresses. (i went back and discovered that the directory in which Hubby looked up Chris' address was an office directory.) WAY too much liability ensues if a corporation discloses home addresses of employees, besides it not furthering business efficacy!

You be the judge!!! I say thanks for sharing.

Where is the revenge? Humiliating her and her lover in front of her family was more than enough revenge...

I guess I will never understand why the disenchanted spouse does not ask for a divorce.... Perhaps they believe that a bit of strange will jump start their sex life again. Looking at the back story brings up the phrase, "Marry in haste and regret at your leisure".

Merry Christmas slut. Now eat shit and die.

OH YEAH

HA

he smoked a fat cock, his cornhole rudely buggered, betrayed!

Short and to the point. Very well done.

Short and sweet. 5 * .

The husband took a clever plan of action, knowing that Darlene was having an affair and that she was not stopping despite the counselling he went to face her work place fuck toy. Then having her fuck toy tell the sorid tale of the affair good detail in front of Darlene's surprised family he knew that Darlene would have no rebuttal. Then he told her to not come back to their home and never to talk to him again. Nicely done but it all hinged on the direct action and clever plan of the wronged husband.

Painfully Poignant. Wonderfully written. One that has stayed with me.

So glad you gave Alan balls; I can only assume he will BTB!

just fucking great. 6 years is not that long, find another woman.

But, I have faith he'll go back to his old ways.

Perhaps sex with Alan sucks?

Its that or mentioned wife has her own problems.. and gets off by cheating.

Anyhow.. its good that he did not even think about staying with her. There could be some more after.. talk. Like how much her family hated and detested her.

Please write a flow up it wasn't long enough! More revenge and happy ending for the hubby required.

Fucking cunt got what she deserved. A divorce for christmas. Still i'd like to see how their lives turned out. Oh well.

Finish the story!