All Comments on 'Clothing Optional Day at the Beach'
by SPEN STERLING
- 23 Comments
sooriresalmost 13 years agoThis story is so plausible that it is erotic. Great, and please continue to new heights of desire and pleasure.
jessy19almost 13 years agoSuper sexy and fun read. I liked the little twist at the end. Hope these three have more fun ;)Dan sounds so sexy!
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoThe core story is probably fine as is the telling. But it could be better by removing the grade school level gunk such as "OOOOOOO" which should be "OOH" that does the same in less space and clarity.
Scorpio44aalmost 13 years agoThere is a sign near the front door of my home that says, "Beyond this point you may encounter nude people. Feel free to join them." Over the 4th of July weekend there were three other couples visiting. It was almost as hot here and in your story.
rafman188almost 13 years agoAlthough the group sex genre, to use the British vernacular, isn't 'my cup of tea', I decided to read this story after an e-mail from the author.
Surprisingly, I enjoyed this particular story. Don't get me wrong. I have not become an overnight convert. I still strongly believe in sex being a one-on-one experience and nothing will convince me otherwise. Yet the author's style and the tempo made this an enjoyable read.
William smythalmost 13 years agoThis could serve as a college level course--- Intoduction To Oral Sex.
Actualy it's a well written, fun to read, story.
The anonymous commentator must have a terrible need to criticize if all he can conjure up to complain about is a distinction between OOOOOO and OH--and besides he's wrong. In the context of the story OOOOOO is the appropriate term.
It's a clear 5!! A fine story!!
LUSTYWHEELSalmost 13 years agoThis was a nice change as so many stories skip the best part of sex and jump right to fucking. This was nice but you should have elaborated on the rest of the night.
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoThis was a fantastic story! Besides the hotness I especially loved the setting and the group dynamics.
I'm hoping that you turn this in a multi-part series!
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoAn exceptionally well designed plot for a story told so well told that readers will almost automatically vicariously share the experience.
Thank You.
Anonymousover 12 years agowell written,I enjoyed the suspense of what was going to happen next.Fun story would make a great series.
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoWhat a fun story. Well written. Love the way they took their time & looked out for each other. Good job.
olblueyesover 5 years agohhmmm, one of your better sex tales, loved it, tension was great, well written, well paced and very erotic
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