All Comments on 'Comfort Zone Ch. 03'

by nkuravan73

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Well done.

Good descriptive language, nicely paced, very believable. More, please.

misterwhomisterwhoover 12 years ago
And the copy goes original from episode 3

I read all the episodes which you have chosen to write based on my original scripting of the Uncle Shom/ Sunita series. It appears you wanted the story to go in a direction of your choosing; and I disappointed you. So you picked the storyline and then in later parts adapted it to your own taste and fantasy.

You should have acknowledged this approach and I would have had no problem with that. As it stands...

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
lifted once again from the original

nkuravan should seriously stop lifting other's stories. It irritates people. And for those who appreciate this story and the others ( comfort zone ch 01 and ch 02 ) should probably search for the writings of the author MISTERWHO. You would definitely appreciate a great number of his stories, if not all. I, for one, am a fan of MISTERWHO. Its a pity he is not submitting stories regularly.

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