by nkuravan73
Good descriptive language, nicely paced, very believable. More, please.
I read all the episodes which you have chosen to write based on my original scripting of the Uncle Shom/ Sunita series. It appears you wanted the story to go in a direction of your choosing; and I disappointed you. So you picked the storyline and then in later parts adapted it to your own taste and fantasy.
You should have acknowledged this approach and I would have had no problem with that. As it stands...
nkuravan should seriously stop lifting other's stories. It irritates people. And for those who appreciate this story and the others ( comfort zone ch 01 and ch 02 ) should probably search for the writings of the author MISTERWHO. You would definitely appreciate a great number of his stories, if not all. I, for one, am a fan of MISTERWHO. Its a pity he is not submitting stories regularly.