All Comments on 'Comforting Sister Ch. 01'
by Lalah
- 29 Comments
Anonymousabout 16 years agoYou took your time and really made it funny and believable . Nicely done, thanks .
Anonymousabout 16 years agoNice story. If you can get over the grammar and spelling errors, that is.
Anonymousabout 16 years agoOne of the better bro-sis stories out there!! great buildup and kept it fun and interesting throughout...will be waiting for the 2nd installment
ttvttpabout 16 years agoI hope you incorporate ideas from your other stories but this was a very good incest story.
Anonymousabout 16 years agoMakes me remember my brother and me back in high school. Although it never went that far, several times we came close. Makes me miss him all that much more. Thank you. Please keep writing.
walkingeagleabout 16 years agoThis is well written ,beleivable, and extremly exciting! Please hurry with more!
walkingeagleabout 16 years agoThis is well written ,beleivable, and extremly exciting! Please hurry with more!
Anonymousabout 16 years agoIonce spied on my sis when I was young. She was so hot thenM i also felt her up while she was sleeping, or at least I though she was. Very hot and believable story. Can't wait to read chapter two.
Anonymousabout 16 years agoOnly thing that could have made it better was if he had impregnated her.
Anonymousalmost 16 years agogood start but i am only giving it a 50 because too many writers on this site never finish their stories i will give it a better rating if you ever finish it
Anonymousover 15 years agoWhat are you childish critics ranting about? This is, at best, a cute, fairly well-written essay with an overly-sensitive sister, horny brother and ditzy mother comically blocking their (almost) sex until the end.How can anyone think its great or want more?
istrionicoalmost 15 years agoA perfect brother-sister incest story, with an impressive build-up... it will be terrific to read the next chapter, but I think the author is gone. Unfortunately, for all ours regrets.
Anonymousover 13 years agoWould like to screw my brother, but really want my Dad to fuck me. Have shown him my nice titties and let him see me mastrubate, but he won't grab the hint. I know I make him hard, and reaally want him to fill my cunt. Good luck with your brother fantasy(?) And wish me luck with my Daddy fantasy. (I'm so wet thinking about it that I need to make myself cum.)
Anonymousover 13 years agoI loved this story - wish you had writen more of it - BTW, you don't "row" a canoe, you "paddle" a canoe
Anonymousabout 13 years ago... never clean up a broken glass with a mop! You'll leave splinters in it that won't come out and will scratch the floor, not to mention you if you're not careful. Always use paper towels.
prashant1225almost 13 years agoIts stories like this that compel me to read stuff on this site, but it is also unfinished stories like this that have a great deal of potential that make me wish the author would have finished what he started. Hopefully one day I will get a chance to reread this 1st chapter and read the next couple of chapters in this story. Please finish. Please finish. Please finish. Thank You. Thank You. Thank You.
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoYou had a fantastic story. I loved the intimacy they were sharing. I am disappointed you didnt bring us further into their world by creating a sequel.
Anonymousover 10 years agoI loved this story...not only was it very well written, but could have been very true to life.
Great job, as all of your stories have been so far.
catt
debaucherover 10 years agoA well-written story. There's love, passion, and adventure; the sex scenes are neither too long, nor too short; situations are realistic enough to not insult the reader's intelligence. Good work.
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoHer excellent story shows what more and more girls are discovering nowadays--that the best sister-comforter is right there, in their own family. It's their own brother's big hard cock. A girl very often admires her male sibling enormously. He's smart, funny, real cute, and protective of her. And she comes to realize that her brother's got something jumping around in his pants that can do her a world of good. Then, to top it all, like Cindy in this story, she finds out that her big strong brother wants nothing more than to stick that fat young cock of his up the sweet and precious slit between her legs. So her bro gives her a hot incestuous fuck, she cums like crazy, and he blows his brotherly balls up his own sis's warm wet twat. The greatest sister-comforter of all is a twatful of her brother's creamy semen.
