by grafexguy
A 24" C cup? Very few women have a waist that small. A 24" bust would be small for children. 34" I'd believe.
Other than that, nice story!
First of all, Mr. Grafx or whatever has obviously never seen a real woman naked to think that '24C' is an even half-plausible measurement. His weird GarySue creation, Brooke, also wears a size 2 but apparently could whittle a little fat off of her waist. Whatever. She's unsexy and not even likable.
Grafexguy takes the MagneticPoetry approach to porn, which results in Brooke 'fluttering her eyes' just before she gets her ass pounded. Next, she'll smile coyly before giving her lover a blowjob or something.
It's just a terrible, terrible story.
I loved it, and if it was a type so be it. Screw the a-holes who wrote about that. The story was hot as all get out. Probably homos.