All Comments on 'Dance of Seduction Ch. 01'

This is the corrected version of Chapter 1. The original posting had the story duplicated and instead of 4 pages it was 7. Sorry for the original problems but everything is good now and chapters 2 thru 4 should all be posted within the week.

I really like this story. A man should always protect his woman. No matter what.

Good story until the part about him fulfilling some husband/wife big cock fantasy. That came out of left field, changed his character and not relevant to the rest of the story, so far.