All Comments on 'Doing Eva Ch. 04 Pt. 2'

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H.H.MorantH.H.Morantover 10 years ago
Pedestrian

Almost every piece that appears here is fantasy to some degree, but this story was so unimaginative and unoriginal a fantasy it is hard to describe. The eighteen year old nymphet who can't and won't wait to be fucked. She's learned "all" about sex from friends and her grandmother - but no condom, no lube, no discomfort - yeah, right!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Ended to soon!

I really am enjoying this story, but this part most definitely ended too soon! There is enough reality that I can see it possibly taking place. Five (5) stars to this point, even though it felt like this part needed more before stopping for the next installment.

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I find it thrilling to build these stories and invent viable relationships from which others can draw pleasure. Please comment or email me ideas and feedback. It's all welcome.

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