All Comments on 'Domina Shelle's New Hypno Boy Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Kind of sordid to be shilling for some random online domme here, no?

Yes, these are free stories, and of course, you should follow your interests. But FWIW, this seems kind of icky to me, and as pure stories, these are markedly worse than what you normally write (and what you normally write is very good).

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I appreciate everyone's feedback from the stories and hope you enjoy them. It is hard for me to write patiently at times and I know sometimes there are errors in grammar or spelling as I tend to rush through some parts. The moments I get caught up in the most tend to come ou...

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