by oggbashan
I think you're going to have to try harder if you want last place in the competition, this was a good story. :-)
Very good, however I think I would have used some of that hot water to warm the bath water, I hate cold showers. :)
Also, a Loving Wives story about -- hold on to your hats, campers -- a LOVING WIFE! Kinda refreshing.
So what if it wasn't wall to wall sex? Some of us like a story as well as the sex.
Anyone who has read ogbashan's other stories know what to expect.
I often agree with dside, but not this time.
Keep on with the great writing.
The usual unique Og twist made for a fun read. My only complaint is the ending seemed flat and anti-climatic (so to speak).
no cheating, no extra marital sex, hardly any sex scenes at all
This should be in non erotic
A Loving Wives story about a truly loving wife. I can't get enough of them.
Clever and uplifting. (But: "The damn thing ticked like Big Ben and kept waking me up."
Big Ben doesn’t tick. It is the Great Bell of the clock in the Elizabeth Tower in London. Smaller bells toll the quarter, half and three-quarters hour; the Great Bell (Big Ben) tolls only on the hour.)