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Anonymousover 14 years ago

A pretty good start

Some very realistic feelings and actions. Keep it up and stay real

digdaddyrich over 14 years ago

Well written and very erotic

A good build up and background information to make the story believable. Well done! Thanks for the good read.

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Would love feedback on my stories. I'd love to correspond with men and women who share my interests. Also, I appreciate advice and suggestions from readers and other writers. I have also written a few request stories for people and found it a thrill.

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