All Comments on '... for her ART's sake Ch. 01-02'

Your style of writing is very appealing to me. The visual imagery in the piece is extremely well used and very enticing. I am intrigued as to where this is heading (I'm assuming the obvious place, as this is Literotica after all) but i'm more intrigued as to how you're going to accomplish it. Very nice work.

...and held me to the end! :) I'm more a technician then artist but I enjoy illusions (after finding them). Sort of like reading about actions I have not done. I would like to read the description of how your artist describes her painting :)