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SimonBrookeSimonBrookeover 17 years ago
Shockingly hot

Congratulations, Vermilion. I can normally take stroke or leave it, but that hit a lot of my buttons. Very, very hot.

mjl2010mjl2010over 17 years ago
Good Stuff

This is a great start. I can't wait to read more. I hope there's more coming soon...

jomarjomarabout 17 years ago
I like a good stroker myself...

Very steamy. Run with it.

Roxanne ApplebyRoxanne Applebyalmost 17 years ago
A hottie!

Nice mix of non-consent and sweetness here, oddly enough. The story is well written and had the, er, desired effect!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Author, My only comment would be about the missing word in the sentence ,'Mark was kneeling by MY head'. Otherwise, perfect as usual. Thanks as always for another unique story worthy of a five. jntiques

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Emelia Bell is an author whose voice, both written and spoken, is uniquely English. She writes intense and steamy stories with strong characters and plots and mind-blowing sex scenes. If your taste runs to the Anglophiliac and you appreciate a plot-driven stroke story then E...