by nhplayguy
Excellant body of work. It brought the reader "into" the story and you felt as if it were happening to you. No unnecessary vulgarity, just enticing flows of thought. Loved it!
Bob on LI
I'm glad to know I was right.....you are more than a ONE story wonder!! :)
Once again, your story is well written, I've noticed a few grammatical and spelling mistakes but nothing to impede on the pleasure of reading it.
As much as I liked this one, your first one still remains my favourite, though.
Keep going.
I loved this story and the way that you wrote it. The first-person perspective is hard to write well, but you have done it. I'm looking forward to reading more from you.
Speaking of birthdays, perhaps you both need to create one for someone else in about nine months?
I enjoyed the story.It hit close to home as I work with several delectable young ladies.I felt the story pulled me into the character as his thought processes echo my own and other men's fantasies.Keep creating!
Amazing story! This is one of the first I've read from this site! I am very impressed. Great job!