All Comments on 'Good Girl'

I thought "Good Girl" was excellent. It captured the feeling between these two people exceptionally well. I believed they actually existed and what more can you ask for in a story.

You must know how your words entwine and stroke and demand a response from your readers. How could a girl resist revealing her true self to you?

his_girl

Very well written. It left me and my imagination dripping....

I don't see the nonconsent in the story. I don't give a shit what those other people said. There was no fucking nonconsent. Just because shes blindfolded doesn't make it nonconsent, hon. Nonconsent consists of fighting back or at least saying the word no. But obviously you're opposed to the non part of nonconsent. Work on it.

This sounds more like control/BDSM than non-consent.

I like it, oh yeah, made me feel quite wet - but it's just in the wrong place!