All Comments on 'Gotta Love Fucking A Strong Man'

They fit together in an unbelievably erotic way!

I can think of some great new experiences for her. I don't want this to move too fast, but I can't wait for more.

Good plot, good description of sex. The big problem for me is the dialogue, which is very stilted and unnatural. Especially William's words. He sounds like a very repressed preacher, which is out of character for what he's doing and where he lives. Also, I worry about the fact that he's so controlling---and so abrupt about it. Is he going to turn out to be an abuser/controller? Lucille's interior dialogue sounds very believable, but then I'm a man and could well be mistaken about what would go through a woman's mind under the circumstances.

Her backstory about being raised in a religious home and marrying a repressed homosexual man was unnecessary and insulting. Which is weird because as the other commenter pointed out, William talks like a preacher. Don't know what's going on there, but the backstory is not erotic or necessary.

This is a fine story, but for the dialogue. A church-going woman of faith would not be using the f word all the time, or taking the Lord's name in vain, or using a phrase like "oh sister of mercy", whether she was sexually active or not. As for William, his words are far too lecturing a romantic encounter.