All Comments on 'Halloween Surprise'

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nicho1855nicho18557 months ago

What's the go with re-posting only part of this story. Are you planning on doing a longer series this time around?

swfb70swfb707 months ago

way to short

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Who is Blake? The story doesn't make any sense.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

wasn't this also posted a week ago?

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Copied

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

A bit confusing and an outline/plan might help clarify the story for readers.

Sonnyw55Sonnyw557 months ago

You rewrote this story and made it short. Are you going to change the ending of it? I read the with the similar title of yours.

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