All Comments on 'Handsome Ch. 05'

I have really enjoyed this series so far, but please don't copy paste a past scene from one chapter and try to pass it off as something different, (in this case the baseball game, growth spurt, next game, and new uniform scene from the first chapter), If you don't feel like writing out a new game or 2 for your lead in either don't include it or summarize it, but don't insult your readers by plagiarizing yourself. It's one thing if you are recapping the previous chapters events to refresh the readers memory with a paragraph or two, but this is different. Now as I said I really am enjoying this story, and look forward to more. I just don't want to see you messing up your good work by cutting corners.

I erred in my editing while merging chapters. I will endeavor to be more careful in the future. The reader was correct in calling me on it. Again, my sincere apologies.

Please stay with the story, it is one of my better efforts.

PW

It appeared that about half of the fist page - the baseball section - was a direct copy and paste from an earlier chapter.

I also wonder why the baseball is that and in such detail. It is a complete passion killer for me.

Otherwise I am really enjoying this series.

Tom D

Any baseball player at that age would be wearing a cup, so no erection would have been seen!