All Comments on 'Hummingbird Rose Ch. 01'

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sevenup_26 over 1 year ago

Good sexy story

sevenup_26 over 1 year ago

Good sexy story

KeyboardCum 11 months ago

Judging from this first chapter, absolutely my kinda story, I enjoy your writing, her character, the humor, the unspoken second conversation she has (in her mind). And a nice balance between telling a story and making the characters come to live and building and releasing sexual tension in the conversation. Not too prude, nor too lewd.

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I've been writing erotica since the summer of 2012. I'm a published novelist and find writing erotica to be a cathartic outlet. I seek to craft erotic fiction which is smart, character-driven, and, although mostly fantasy, is sometimes based on real memories and experiences. ...

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