All Comments on 'Hypnotic Seduction'

With a tale like this you do not have to suggest 5s, just encouage us to vote and you will get mostly fives.

Obviously I like the tale. A few minor jumps in the tale; like forgetting to lead us thru the start of a trance but I can overlook them

i will never look at a female dentist in the same way again.

more please

Enjoyable. Makes me want to get my pussy licked right now!! I might have to put a leave slip in for a couple of hours to go home from work, break out the toys & get my pussy to squirt a bit of it's own juice. Mmm.

The story felt static and somewhat artificial to me. It didn't have a natural flow in it, and felt more like it was made as a list. Do this, did that, went there, etc.....

Having actually seen people hypnotized by stage hypnotists, this story is 100% believable... And 100% HOT. But it should have lasted a little longer. Hopefully there is a sequel.

Magnificent story! I agree that it would have been nice to be longer...but readers can't be choosers. I'm encouraging you to write more!!

Good, believable story. I liked the fairly detail accounts of the fucking. It would be better if you went into more detail about the undressing and foreplay.