All Comments on 'I’m Not Mom, Scene 01'

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oldwayneoldwayneover 14 years ago
Great intro.

I'll be eagerly anticipating the rest of the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
great

can't wait for the next scene.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 14 years ago
A good foundation for the pending story

I'll be watching for the rest of the story. I hope that the next chapter will be longer, though this was good it was short. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Nice start - looking forward to the rest.

Could be a good story with some twists?

knickersoffreadyknickersoffreadyover 14 years ago
Hurry

With the next chapter, please. You have brought out what must be latent desires in me already!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Good idea, not long enough!

Very good premise for an erotic story but, it needs to be longer and more built up I think. Please add more content with new stories, thanks a lot.

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 14 years ago
Excellent

Only just came across this and am I wrapped

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Great story!!

Awesome!!! Continue please haha (:

Firmhands5Firmhands5almost 9 years ago
She should and will be eaten up

Yummmy - a wonderful spread about to be enjoyed by both

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great start, but way (way) too short.

Foxterot7aFoxterot7a6 months ago

As an avid reader of mutually consensual incestuous love stories, one of the first things I look for is indepth and breadth character development. Thus said, the character of the mother has not been logically developed. For example, what and how was she raised? Why did her husband leave? Was she a good wife and mother? Why did she need such large breasts? Based on her presumed size, she got utters instead of breasth. It appears she does not have a solid ego nor id.

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