by watchingyou2
I'll be watching for the rest of the story. I hope that the next chapter will be longer, though this was good it was short. Thanks
Could be a good story with some twists?
With the next chapter, please. You have brought out what must be latent desires in me already!
Very good premise for an erotic story but, it needs to be longer and more built up I think. Please add more content with new stories, thanks a lot.
Yummmy - a wonderful spread about to be enjoyed by both
As an avid reader of mutually consensual incestuous love stories, one of the first things I look for is indepth and breadth character development. Thus said, the character of the mother has not been logically developed. For example, what and how was she raised? Why did her husband leave? Was she a good wife and mother? Why did she need such large breasts? Based on her presumed size, she got utters instead of breasth. It appears she does not have a solid ego nor id.